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person Mara
schedule January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I would just like to say that despite all the other people you\'ve mentioned who dislike this story, I was riveted, you have a real gift for telling stories and it would be a shame to let a lot of illiterate fools keep you from continuing. Thank you for contributing such a wonderful story. I hope you don\'t mind but I\'ve made a copy of it to keep, it was just too good to lose.
A Fan
person Julia
schedule January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Honey, don\'t let those bastards tell you that kind of stuff. I don
person Julia
schedule January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
As I was saying before my dear dog stepped on the keyboard.... Don\'t let them get. Yo. You most definitely CAN write. I am one damm of a reading freak so I know what I\'m talking about. You have talent. No one expects you to write a Bestseller book here. Though I\'d like to read one ;) Keep writting whatever you feel like writting and don\'t bother with those lousy excuses for humans :) It\'s just jelousy! I liked your story very much and if I don\'t review many o fthe stories I read is just cause I got one poor conection and one really stalking mother that controlls every second I spend on the web. Don\'t you dare stop writting!! I will be waiting for new stories to come out of your brain ^_~.
person Lychee
schedule January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I can not believe the things people can say to others. Those quotes from your flames...holy crap! Although really, it\'s amazing that peocan can actually type with their heads that far up their asses. And the lesbian comment would be laughable if it wasn\'t so cruel (what, like lesbians don\'t have sex? Duh!) But nevermind those delinquents! This chapter; wow. Just wow. It was fabu!! And I\'m just so frikkin\' happy that you\'re going to finish the story *glomps author*. To those who said you couldn\'t write lemons or anything else; well, I got a little something for you right here! *turns around and drops trou* Stick that in your pipe and smoke it!!
person Shaeya Sedjet
schedule January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hiya! First of all, I just wanted to say (in response to Ladynblk4), \"What a bitch!\" If you want me to find her and beat the living CRAP out of her, I would gladly do that:-) I, personally, have loved reading this fic. I think it is wonderful. I do have a suggestion for you, though. I\'ve only read the first chapter thus far, so I don\'t know if you fixed this already, or not. Anyhoo, it would be nice if you spaced the paragraphs and dialogue a little more. I have trouble reading documents that are typed so closely, and I\'m sure there are others like me. Anyhoo, GOOD LUCK! I love it!
person CybrEmly01
schedule January 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Yay yay yay! *Bounces around the room like a hyper-active acrobat*

Thanks bunches for the chapter and thank you soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
much for the e-mail. It made me feel all warm and fuzzy.
(Don\'t mind me, I\'m just a bit more \'up\' than usual)

Anyways, feel free to continue. I\'ll be around.

Ja Ne,
CybrEmly
person Ryan
schedule January 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
All right the fic continues! So this is the infamous green-eyed woman. Seems like just another avarage person to me.
The question is what really happened that day when Tae Saw her and Sano together.
Man, that has got to be one FUNKY smell comeing out of the river. Caution: Biohazard!
Hopefull this Xander will not lose control and attack our heros when they come inquireing about his new love and what she was doing with Sano that day.
Loved the chapter and I can\'t wait to see how this all comes together.
person Xona
schedule January 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay for another chapter! (I\'ve been obsessivly checking for your update every day since you decided to continue ^^; )Now I\'m really curious as to what Sano and Kazuio\'s real relationship is. oh the possibilities!!! Can\'t wait for the next update!!! ^^

take care,
xona
person lere
schedule January 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m VERY PROUD of you!!!! The note were hard but I think you finally put an end to the whole atribulation. I can\'t believe what some sick people is capable to say!!!! But look our our reviews. YOU hold the longest review list here!!!! You are the best and will allaws be!!!!! Put your nose high, shake your ass and say with me: I DID IT!!! I\'M THE BEST!!!! AND I CAN MAKE PEOPLE HAPPY!!!!

Love you!!!! Big hugs from Brazil!!!!

Lere.
person sunshine hell
schedule January 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m glad you\'re back.

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