rate_review Reviews

Dear Tsuki-San,
I quite like your story. I\'m sorry that others do not have the maturity or literary appreciation necessary to reaaappaappreciate your writing in the manner that it should be. I for one find your writing excellent. You have a good grasp of the characters, and/or have made their responses quite consistent. I was so sad when I read that you were not going to continue the story. Thank you for at least re-considering it!! The emotion that you put into this story is lovely; and hard to find in most of the other fictions out there, I think. Can\'t wait to see what else you will cook up!
Don\'t get discouraged! Keep wirting! And flamers, Piss off! This lady can actually WRITE! (I have my doubts about fla flamers...maybe thee jee jealous? I sure am...)
Cheerfully yours,
Lanenkar

Good for you! I hope to read the new chapter soon. Very happy that you are continuing this fic.

Okay, I\'m all in \"Happy Happy Joy Joy\" land now.

I\'m not kidding. Just a few minutes ago I was dancing around the room
singing \"I feel pretty\" for no good reason. And I don\'t know enough words
to sing it well.

Ja,
CybrEmly

hey, dont feel bad! I loved this story! I believe that you should do whatever you want, most people know that true love has a lot of ups and downs, im sure u were just trying to point that out right? but when its in the balance, nothings better than that. I believe that you didnt mean to offend anybody, i loved this story, dont feel down about it, k?

Kishimoto Hotaru

I was shocked when I read about yor premature ending to this fic
and I am saddened by your departure please write for us that love your fic not for those selfish, immature, couldent get the point even if they were stabbed by it,
brats who havent even got a clue as to what your even writing about.
oh yes and let me tell you a gret majority of the people here are of the yuonger age, as in inexpierienced quite a few i know from my area i whom are way, way too young to even be on this site have been caught by me goin onto this site so dont take the criticism of children
treat them like children and send them to bed w/o thier supper and a few hundred spankings

okay i think i have typed too much and I hope the point to my message didnt get lost

take care ill miss you and your fic

But what happen with sano?

Please continue the story! I really want to read the ending to this story. The only opinion that matters is your own. As an fan of your other fics on FFN, please know that you have my support should you ever continue this fic.

First, I will like to tell you that I really like your story. I believe it is deep and full of meaning. It deals with the good side of being in love the insecurities it makes us feel. Also, I do not believe that in any way you have accused men of being cheating jerks; however I believe you did prove that some of them are still worth loving and trusting. I really love the way you write it is very unique and I would love if werewere to continue writing your thoughts and ideas; you have my full support.

You ignore what they saidavinaving been married 23 years myself to my \"one true love\", I tell you that anyone who tells you that you don\'t \"get it\" doesn\'t get it themselves. Finish the story. I understood what Kenshin was going through. I love my husband with all my heart and soul, but I haun iun into men who I *reacted* to in a sexual sense. Did I take them to bed? No, I did not. Did it mean I love my husband less? No, it does not!! It just means that occasionally the body reacts without our say-so. We can\'t control our reactions, only our actions.

Finish this story. It\'s a good story - it\'s interesting, and I think you have a good grasp on the characters\' motivations.

Don\'t let the bastards grind you down ...

Write what you want to write, and screw anyone who tries to tell you not to. Figuratively speaking,
of course. I happen to like your story. And the first version of the Teahouse scene. After all,
Kenshin is Human, Male, and Alive. (Storywise, anyway) What did they expect him to do, have no
physical reaction to an obviously attractive woman? Not very realistic.

Anyways, I hope you continue despite the stupidity of other reviewers. Like Einstein said \"The difference
between Genius and Stupidity is Genius has it\'s limits.\"

Ja Ne,
CybrEmly