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This is a fair fic. The characters are a bit OOC (or VERY OOC, depanding on how you look at it). But the only thing that REALLY gets me is your fangirl japanese. Ok, they live in japan. We know they are speaking japanese. It makes your story look very odd when you insert random words of japanese in with a sentance full of english. It just doesn\'t make much sense. About the only time I can see japanese being used at all is in names of people, places, or objects Don\'t get me wrong now; this isn\'t a flame, but please avoid the fangirl japanese as it it very distracting.

I wish that you would add more chapters to this story!..I really love it and have been waiting for months!..Plese add more....
lotsalove
kat

This is a very good fic. I was just curious on the last time you worked on this. I myself am trying to get into the swing of things again with my writing. I haven't scene more than the first three episodes of Gravitation but I believe that they way you contructed Yuki and Shindo is great. They actually sound like the ones on the movie. Great job!

I really like the the way you depict Yuki, because I view him in the same light. And I thought your writing and style was great, it didn\'t seem young at all, of course, I\'m 18 too. I really hope you continue eventually!

Hahaha you\'re such a whore, add another fucking chapter. x.o YOUR STORY IS...the best. Because I am god. O_o.......and because I can say that...and because I HELPED WRITE THIS....*dies of caffeine overload*...OMG PINK TISSUES!!!!!!!!!!!

Great story and all...yup...sou desu. XD

-Ryu-

waaaaahhhhhh!!!! your fic is ssssoooooo good!!! the more lemons the better... lemon tarts and lemon cream pies both make me happy! but it\'s sooooo sad! poor shu-chan! i wanna fuck him too! (though i think he\'s getting enough of the i\'ll-fuck-you-to-comfort-you type stuff... so maybe i\'ll just hug him...) and take that razor away!!! poor baby shouldn\'t hurt himself... i have MUCH impathy for him there... *sigh* you\'re a great writer, you kick ass! YAY!!!

I\'m enjoying reading this story! I have to say it\'s nice to see a fic in which Yuki is not fluffy and sappy. He\'s not like that at all! I can\'t wait to see how you continue this. Please update soon!

Why alcoholic? Do you know what happens with your liver after too much drinking? I’m not saying that Yuki’s beautiful eyes won’t be so attractive anymore….so why alcoholic?
Still good chapter. And I hope that now you’d continue sooner. ^.^
Best Wishes, XD

Oh, yeah, got to read it. Yeah, like the softer side of Yuki, but I know you\'re going to have him get a bit meaner with the alcohol. It gets to be an uncontrollable thing. I don\'t mind things getting mean, but I like when they can have a change of heart (for the better of course) realizing what they\'ve been doing that\'s hurt the one that loves you. Hopefully, I\'ll be reading you again soon. Yuki&Shuichi!

Excellent chapter! I cant wait to see what happens next!
Please update again soon!
Lotsa Luv
Debs xxx