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February 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awww that was so bittersweet. Her first love was man enough to admit that he wasnt right for her. And he even hooked her up with another great guy...wow...go Saitou! hehe I liked it....garsh Susumu is such a stalker. Original and not to many grammatical errors! cool beans
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December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
challenge: soujixtetsu fic...........................if interested email me at konoha_ninja3888@yahoo.com.au
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November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice!!!
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November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WANT VARIETY?TRY A TETSUXSOUJI PAIRING..........SEE READERS\' JAWS DROP................................SEEEEEN CRITICS GO SPEECHLESS....AT THIS DARING CONTROVERSIAL PAIRING........................................FIERY TETSU AND CALM SOUJI....................UNLIKELY COUPLE..............................INTRIGUE READERS..........MAKE THEM WANT FOR MORE.........BE DIFFERENT FROM THE REST.......................BE DARING.......................I CHALLENGE ALL TALENTED AND DARING AUTHORS TO WRITE UP AN EXCELLENT SXT PAIRING..........SHOCK PEOPLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!EMAIL ME AT konoha_ninja3888@yahoo.com.au
I DARE YA....I DARE YA.............C\'MON PEOPLE TRY THE UNEXPECTED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!IF U CAN PAIR UP OC WITH THE PMK CHARACTERS WHY NOT TRY THIS PAIR FOR A CHANGE!!!!
I DARE YA....I DARE YA.............C\'MON PEOPLE TRY THE UNEXPECTED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!IF U CAN PAIR UP OC WITH THE PMK CHARACTERS WHY NOT TRY THIS PAIR FOR A CHANGE!!!!
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March 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this very interesting point of view on Saitou in the story. He is softer, compassion and more polite in this one.
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May 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well. I won\'t spoil anything for you, but it\'s suffice to say that Ayu is not what she appears to be in the later PMK episodes and therefore the fic is not entirely plausible in canon. No matter, I believe authors have the full right to write AUs and what-not.
The technical aspect of the fic was excellent (except for a few minor grammar mistakes) and I like the absence of unneccesary details.
What I didn\'t like was the harlequin-romance tone; replace the names of the characters with something like \"James\" and \"Viola\", and voila - there you have it, an instant first chapter of a cheap romance novel.
Keep writing, I suppose, but do try to free your writing from the cliches.
The technical aspect of the fic was excellent (except for a few minor grammar mistakes) and I like the absence of unneccesary details.
What I didn\'t like was the harlequin-romance tone; replace the names of the characters with something like \"James\" and \"Viola\", and voila - there you have it, an instant first chapter of a cheap romance novel.
Keep writing, I suppose, but do try to free your writing from the cliches.
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April 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, you obviously haven\'t seen far enough into PMK to know that your characterization of Ayumu is totally wrong. Ayu-nee is a ninja spy just like her little brother, and she\'s certainly not a virgin. This fic unfortunately will need to be labeled as A/U.
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January 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
A very sweet story -- I would love to read more of your fanfics about the Peacemaker Kurogane version of Saitou!
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January 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Only recently started watching Peacemaker Kurogen so names are still fairly new to me but I loved this fic but I hate it ended like this only because it would have made for great angst her wanting him, him wanting another, and the guy that like her wanting h So So tragic. But all in all it was and excellent fic and as soon as I figure out how to do my recommended reading list you can bet you will be added.
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December 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Was taking a peak over here for fics and just had to read this again! It\'s just so good! Catch you later!