schedule
April 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i liked it you should make another chapter
schedule
January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Pairing: 9.5/10
Concept: 9.5/10
Writing style: 9.5/10
Written: 9/10
Character: 8/10
Imp. Character: 8.5/10
AllinAll: 8.9/10 (Awesome!!)
Pairing = The people involved in the sexual relationship. Concept = The fic\'s idea. Writing style = The author\'s ways. Written: How well written. Character: How in charas. Is. Imp. Character: Improvement on characters.
How you can improve? Write things out longer, ^-^ It\'s a very good, complete story.
Concept: 9.5/10
Writing style: 9.5/10
Written: 9/10
Character: 8/10
Imp. Character: 8.5/10
AllinAll: 8.9/10 (Awesome!!)
Pairing = The people involved in the sexual relationship. Concept = The fic\'s idea. Writing style = The author\'s ways. Written: How well written. Character: How in charas. Is. Imp. Character: Improvement on characters.
How you can improve? Write things out longer, ^-^ It\'s a very good, complete story.
schedule
January 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Woo... pretty! ^_^ meza loves this! Hai hai! Really great story. There was so much of that primal dispare and need that it was nearly overwhelming! Truely amazing! ^_^