rate_review Reviews

This is all kinds of beautiful. Wow. Soft and sweet and a nice ending - at the water's edge, just like where it began. I also like how you wove quotes into the story throughout its progress.

I wish more KaworuxShinji stories had happy endings like this... **sniffle**

This is a wonderful story. You should definately continue. Your way with words are simply amazing.

Beautiful vocabulary. The flow of it was a little awkward but understandable and the song choice was lovely.

That was consuming and overwhelming. Filling me with such joy and inspiration that I could hardly breath, eveloping my entire being within its loving beauty. So confliting I felt I was being crushed and at the same time lifted above it all, filling me with the desire to be consumed by tears while laughing with an utter ecstasy. I pray you do not think me foolish, and I'm sorry, I know I'm waxing poetic. However, I beseech you, do not discontinue your writing, if this story is any indication it is truly beautiful and deserves to receive acknowledgement for the masterpiece it is. I pray you are aware that I am being completely sincere and honestly mean all I have written. Please continue your work, it is unbelievably enthralling. I adore it. Yrs~ Nacht

The large spaces... the flashes of the mind... brilliant....

Wow, I love this fic. It\'s so wonderful. Seme-Shinji! XD~~

Seme Shinji!!! Wh00t!!! The pranks were so random... I was just sitting there and staring at the screen and snickering rather loudly... and all the while wondering what on earth Kaworu was on XD. Loved it. Really loved it. Lovely yaoi... sweet sweet yaoi. If I have one qualm, then it would be that Kaworu\'s POV seems so distant and analytical. Yes, it seems like Kaworu is indeed very emotional... but the writing itself wasn\'t as emotion-invoking. *shrugs* Its an interesting style that seems to suit him.

This story is absolutely beautiful. I love how you portray Kaworu, your characterization is wonderful. The sex was loving and well written as well. Great fic.

This is... beautifully written. Job well done! It\'s interesting how Shinji was the \"top\" but i\'m not complaining. I liked the whole Kaworu\'s POV. I say again, job well done.

Beautiful. Just... beautiful. The middle, the pranks, made me stare at the screen totally dumbfounded. The sex had me squirming and squealing. The end made me want to cry. *snugs* I love it and wish there were more Shinji/Kaworu out there like this.