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March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dirty? You haven\'t seen /anything/ yet.
<3 Not enough Aya/Omi fics around this place. Not ones with decent grammar and stuff, anyways...
This was good, I\'m glad I read it.
<3 Not enough Aya/Omi fics around this place. Not ones with decent grammar and stuff, anyways...
This was good, I\'m glad I read it.
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June 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Is it weird to review a story written almost two years ago? I don\'t think so. Hey, I read it, why not review it, right? I\'m a fan of Aya/Omi, most definitely. And the reason is right in this fic, when they talk after entering the buidling. Omi just seems like a remedy to their, but especially to Aya\'s, problems for some reason. And the lemon was hot. Can\'t forget to mention the lemon... Latah!
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June 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay, very nice story.
Have you ever written any Fushigi Yugi yaoi fiction?
Because frankly, two thirds of ths tas taken practically verbatim from a story I\'ve read.
Scarily so.
I mean, name change, basically.
Not good.
Have you ever written any Fushigi Yugi yaoi fiction?
Because frankly, two thirds of ths tas taken practically verbatim from a story I\'ve read.
Scarily so.
I mean, name change, basically.
Not good.
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December 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I really liked it. Very cute and fluffy. ^___^
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June 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
if you feel dirty, take a bath!! ^-^ that was great!!!
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February 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I actually really like the Aya/Omi pairing, its my favorite too, cause i think its the one that has the most evidence and its sweet. I think thats part of the reason why this fic seemed to work well, you did a good job. Continue the good Aya/Omi-ness!!! there are other out there...... mwahahahahahahaha- sleep...
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December 11, 2002 at 12:00 AM
Sugoi! Lovely Aya and precious Omi, so wonderful together! And your writing was nice as well, you didn't leave Omi all inactive and you gave them both a chance. Excellent job!
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October 16, 2002 at 12:00 AM
Aha, good ol\' Weiß PWP. :D And with a not-as-common pairing, too! I have almost a loathing for mainstream pairings, het or slash, unless they\'re extremely well-written. I especially love not-as-common pairings when they\'re written well like this one was. ^_^
Admittedly, I thought it moved a bit fast from the trying-to-get-Ran-to-open-up to the trying-to-get-Ran\'s-pants-off-as-fast-as-possible, it still was quite enjoyable. Ran was in character, Omi was in character, and the description during the lemon, while not as lengthy as I would have liked, was great. ^_^
Other gripes: Use of random Japanese here and there, and a few typoes, but that\'s it.
Admittedly, I thought it moved a bit fast from the trying-to-get-Ran-to-open-up to the trying-to-get-Ran\'s-pants-off-as-fast-as-possible, it still was quite enjoyable. Ran was in character, Omi was in character, and the description during the lemon, while not as lengthy as I would have liked, was great. ^_^
Other gripes: Use of random Japanese here and there, and a few typoes, but that\'s it.