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PLEASE PLEASE you must write the epilogue to this amazing fic! It\'s sooo sweet. I want to know what happens to Ryo and Dee. PLEASE I\'ll love you forever!!

I like your username, happy berry, it\'s really cute. The story wasn\'t bad, though it leaves me with a few questions. \"Why did Ryo collapse after he returned with Dee\'s body?\" Maybe I\'m just ignorant, but I\'m confused as to why he would collapse rather than have a burst of adrenaline and see to it that Dee was properly taken care of (in bed and everything) and *then* maybe collapse. Also, I don\'t know if this is true for the mumps but, generally, with those types of contagious, only-get-once-in-a-life diseases it is deadlier the *older* the victim is not the other way as you said in the story. Things seemed to happen so fast and so simply, then again I\'m a fan of the thousands of angst-filled twists and turns. I\'ll wait for that epilogue. ;)

Eee! That story was so good! I really felt for the characters, especially J.J. <=O I heart J.J.!!! ^_^;; Yes, the whole thing was very interesting, especially the last chapter! ^.^ Keep up the great work!

awesome, awesome fic. i usually hate AUs but this one really was great. though you\'d think a half black boy in that time period would be a little more accepting. hmm. I was really scared for their relationship then and there! great fic. cant wait to read the epilouge!

OMG the memory part on that last chapter made me fall out of my chair! Okay, GREAT story. Very original and I LOVED IT! Excellent job, sweet, frustrating as hell at times, which is good ^_~ and they were still pretty much in character! Man I loved it. This was excellent! T____T Now if you\'ll excuse me, I must go cry my eyes out.

okay, that\'s enough time, UPDATE!!! *grin*

OMG!!! That was such a sweet ending.. I loved it!! (;_;) I\'m gunna cry now.. It was a wonderful fic!!! *pulls out box of tissues* Excuse me *turns around, wipes eyes then blows nose* Now let\'s dance! \\(^0\\) (/0^)/

ooooaaaahhhh hehe ^o^ I loved it I had read tirstirst chappie awhile ago and loved it! came back and was like O.O WHOA whered all these other chapters come from! BUUUUT nothing beats the Dee & Ryo pairing ^_~ (And Boy are they a PAIR, pair of hotties anyway) :giggles: update with the (epiloge?)can\'t spell) soon pwease! ^-^
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That\'s not fair!!! You can\'t stop there and not update for a few days!! That\'s pure torture! Think of poor me *whine* UPDATE *please?*

Come on. Don\'t let me hang here!!! for the past two days I\'m nearly going out of my mind without the next chapter. UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE!!!!!! *please* *pretty-please*? *pretty-please-with-charry-on-top*?