rate_review Reviews

wow!

Wow...the grammar, spelling and structure could use just a bit of work. And I can\'t see Gateau calling Marron \"babe\". But otherwise, this was a really nice read. ^_^ I like how Gateau came to the sisters for advice, and the way you portrayed Carrot was wonderful. I hate fanfics where Carrot hates Marron being with Gateau for homophobic reasons, it just doesn\'t fit. Carrot worrying that Gateau might hurt Marron seems much closer to his character-he really cares about Marron even if he doesn\'t display it so openly.

And the smut scene was hot. :D

Whee-oo! Nice and hot, with dominant but not sadistic Gateau! :D Great stuff.