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May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
DUDE! EVIL! Why did you stop there! UPDATE! want more!
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May 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
she\'s already tainted? lol, what does that mean?
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March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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March 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THAT WAS A VERY HOOOOOT STORY!!! HOPE U WILL BE ABLE TO KEPP ON WRITING THIS FIC AND UPDATING THE CHAPTERS LATER ON IN THE FUTURE! AND CAN U ADD A REALLY HOT LEMO SCENE? JA NE.
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December 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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December 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hm.... i like it! update soon, please?
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October 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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October 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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September 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Stranger and stranger. I could have sworn Robin torched Ziezan when the Factory fell, literally. Ah well, interesting story line and very handling of the relationships. My only critque is that you might want to mark this as AU.
Btw, if you got into 'Edit Story' you can delete the original version of Chapter 8, the new one does flow a lot better.
Btw, if you got into 'Edit Story' you can delete the original version of Chapter 8, the new one does flow a lot better.
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September 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?