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November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well that was different (dark), but I kinda liked it, especially as it took place during Pre-Instrumenality in EoE. *evil grin* You think towards the end of this you could get em together, ie they want to have sex instead of one forcing the other? Good job so far, though it needs more sex descriptions.
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January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
desultory narration but realistic plotline. keep it up!
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October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was good. I don\'t really like rape and I seriously don\'t believe Shinji will ever behave that way; this was still good. A little background info on their relationship would help me understand better. I would like to see where you\'re going with this.
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May 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hi nice fic. but kinda brutal. welll.... update soon!
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April 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I find the last part a bit funny, when she jst jumps up and kicks him.
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March 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very nice indeed. I\'ve always been a fan of Asuka strangling. I\'ll be looking forward to the next chapter.
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March 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Are you the same bakashinji from DS and EFO? No matter. Good stuff. A little low on details for a lemon, though. Not lemony enough, IMHO.
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March 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
definitely intense....wow