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January 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You have a very good story here, however there are a few things I would suggest to you. 1. You need to have someone edit your work for gramatical and spelling errors, 2. Lantis and Eagle aren't really completely lovers until the end of your story in which case I would suggest that instead of using the word lover use either thier names or some other such thing. Otherwise good job!!
-K
-K
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October 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i loved this! M.K.R. yaoi stories are very seldom seen. great job =^^=
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September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aw! That was so good! Have more confidence in your abilities, hon! You rock!
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May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I wanted to read a lemon scene between Lantis and Eagle for....I don´t know six...or seven years...You made my dream become true!!!
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January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, I loved it! I never see enough of this couple, and you wrote them so beautifully! Thank you for sharing this.