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schedule July 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, man. I wasn\'t too sure about this story based on the premise, but it\'s turned out to be awesome! It\'s really hot, and it had me falling out of my chair laughing besides. Hurry with the next chapter, would ya?! =3
person um
schedule July 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ugggh!
person KD
schedule July 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You know... when Goku said he suck cock better than goyjo.. I almost laugh myins ins out... It was hillarious! Anyway... I\'m really curious how sanzo is going to manage with the lessons. Come to think of it, Gojyo is the one who benefited in the situation! Lucky him!
person Blaqueluna
schedule July 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Teheheeee, now the great Sanzo-sama has decided to take some love-making lessons.....I wonder how Gojyo\'s new student will fare out as compared with Goku. XD This fic is simply too awesome!!! I can\'t wait \'til the next batch of updates arrives ^.~



person Irihi Safaia
schedule June 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*squeeks happily* So incredibly pleased. Hurry and post more. I wanna see how Sanzo\'s lessons turn out *giggles*
person ryushin
schedule June 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Arg... you made us wait sooooo damn long! I honestly did a Happy-Dance when I saw you uploaded
two chapters today! Geeez - I know its hard with exams and so on but, honey, take some responsibilty here:
You have written one of the hottest, funniest and did I mention hottest fics up to now - you just cannot leave us hanging
t in in midair - that\'s inappropriate!!!! *rofl
Seriously, I have been looking so forward to another update it made me edgy. Your story is sizzling hot, I love each and
every chapter.
Concerning the updates: loved it that Goku wouldn\'t let Gojyo do him \'cause that would feel wrong. Also liked it that
Goku got to impress the kappa for a change. I thought Sanzo gave in into Gojyo\'s offer a little too soon but that\'s okay.
The point is getting these two between the sheats as well, so I don\'t mind. I love 5x3 action - so write it, don\'t bother yourself with
reality and write! ... pretty please???
person Y.S.
schedule June 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YOU FIALLY UPDATED~!!! YATTA! YATTA! YATTA!! I\'ve been SOOO looking forward to this! You made us wait WAY too long!! *sobs* But ya hit us with TWO chapters - *falls over* I can\'t wait to see what Gojyo-sensei has in store for Sanzo! Hehehe, and an eventual threesome? Damn!! Please update ASAP!!!
person Nikki
schedule June 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
<> I love this line! I picture a WAY too smug chibi Gojyo jumping upand down waving victory figners, the thought just cracks me up! I love how highly he thinks of himself. Please write more soon, this is a great story!

person Iapetus
schedule June 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
O.O

Oh. My. God. Double update.. I think I could kiss you. However, you already know my reaction from when we were IMing. ^^

Anyways, again - absolutely amazing! I am in awe of how you write (and even if you say you\'re just a commentator, that is no excuse to how you happen to record it - which is wonderful), and the incredible ability you have to make me laugh out loud in the midst of such hot and smutty scenes. The whole \"No! I\'m NOT going to give you a blowjob!\" protesting and then it cutting right to him actually doing it without an explination was PERFECT... sometimes the imagination is so much better to fill in the gap for moments like those. And then later when they walked in on Sanzo... *dies*

I also liked how you didn\'t have Gojyo and Goku *actually* do it, despite all of their fooling around. Both were able to see the line and NOT cross it - no matter how much Goku appreciates Gojyo doing this for him, he loves SANZO like that and not Gojyo. I think that during the eventual threesome if those two did it then, it wouldn\'t be as big of a problem because then they wouldn\'t be doing it behind Sanzo\'s back. But hey, that\'s just my opinion.

And... SANZO HAS DECIDED TO GET LESSONS?! :O :O :O The line about how Gojyo wanted to turn him into a Sex God made me squeal like the fangirl I am. I\'ll admit that one of my guilty pleasure pairings is Gojyo/Sanzo, so I can\'t wait to see any action you have between just the two of them. After all, Sanzo\'s now behind Goku in his education, and needs some tutoring to catch up before they can take lessons together. *evil grin*

Keep up the awesome work, I can\'t wait for your next installment. <3

-Iapetus
person iamzuul
schedule June 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
\"Imagine, the opportunity of having two students, one of whom was Sanzo. Sanzo! Turning that pissy monk into a sex god would be his ultimate accomplishment. Goku and Sanzo would make breathtaking whoopee, and everyone would live happily ever after, with Gojyo as the bearer of peace. The end.\"

I couldn\'t stop laughing. It\'s a good thing that no one else was in the house with me, \'cause I would have had a hard time explaining THAT. Can\'t wait to finally see REALREAL action coming along! Great stuff!

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