rate_review Reviews

This story is fantastic amounts of fun! It\'s been a while since I\'ve laughed out loud so frequently... Light and extremely amusing in all the right places. Please post more of it. I can\'t wait to read the end, especially when you write so very well... and promise threesomes. (*grin*)

The banana and sea cucumber comment was priceless! It had me rolling on the floor in laughter XD. So hilarious and yet so *uhrm!* enlightening at the same time XD. Please write more.....

Very, very, very good. Saiyuki is not the easiest anime to write for, but you have pulle it off splendidly. Yave ave also done well in showing Goku\'s more adult side, so that this doesn\'t seem like a jail bait story. I have been enjoying it tremendously. Please write more!

Nice. That latest chapter was even almost cute. n_n

What a beautiful set-up for the next chappie! I can hardly wait! The characters did make me laugh, Sanzo clenching his fists in anger at the springs, and stomping! Sanzo stomping makes me smile. I love how they can\'t stop themselves even thought they both realize that Sanzo will NOT be happy with this in the end, no matter the results. Sanzo realizes he needs help in the bedroom too, eh? Hmmmm, such interesting possibilities, he could turn to Gojyo for help too, but perhaps it would be better to learn it from his newly well informed Goku. I am anxious for the next part, bring it on!

oooch :X i like a lot your story
its really fun, and plot is interesting
i can\'t wait until next chapter:))))
i m realy courious about sanzo ,will he appreciate goyo\'s service

Bravo. Very good stuff. I must say that i started pitching a tent during the naughty parts. lol. I can\'t wait til you decide to write more than just m/m stuff. Just as long as you stay away from tenticles. :p I can\'t wait til you get to the really good action. Your stories could become a decent source of material. And i\'m not even into that sort of thing really. But anyway all kidding aside. I think you have a great gift and it\'s one i hope you will pursue someday. Not just the smut writing though I think you could be a great journalist which i have told you before you should try and get a job doing. Well you said to review your story so here goes : I love the way your characters stay true to the anime/manga. It\'s full of humor so even without the smutty parts it still stays interesting. Although i do think you focus more on the relationship between the characters than their journey, but i suppose that\'s to be expected since the manga/anime already focuses on that. Anyway in conclusion i love your story, all the chapters are equally engrosing, and i look forward to more. Oh and i almost forgot. I love you. :p Can\'t leave that part out. Toodles

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lol. Poor Sanzo. As foku,oku, he has no idea what he\'s gotten himself into does he?

I just stumbled over your fic while browsing to see if there were any new Saiyuki fics up... I must say I\'m very impressed. I\'ve been laughing non-stop over it. The banana scene alone. ^o^ Your descriptions are very nice and vivid. I can\'t wait for you to continue this fic and see how things turn out. Keep up the good work!

squee! that was good, i hope they get to that hot spring quickly. i cant wait, pls continue writing^^