rate_review Reviews

Understanable about the harddrive crashing. I\'ve lost stuff like that myself--including pictures and downloaded music. As of right now, I do half of my writing at my college library because I have a virus on my computer that slows it down and makes it hard to right completely and as fast as I write ;) Nice suggestion with the imagination, by the way. With all that you both wrote, I\'m sure that no one who read this felt that they couldn\'t imagine a nice ending for Shuichi and Yuki.
I liked this story a lot. It had a nice ending, even if it wasn\'t completed as planned. It totally held true to what was written in the mangas and show and showed what they have to go through, even if it is an alternate universe. Well done.

hmmmm very good :o however... I\'m curious about the change in the timeline... Shuichi was raped, by the gang that Aizawa hired. It\'s very obvious in the manga, and implied in the anime. I\'m not sure if you\'re doing fanfiction lisence, or if you don\'t know tha really did happen-which i doubt.

Anyways... I know it\'s the 1st chapter I\'m reviewing, and I intendt to read the rest. good job!

I was compelled to finish reading this, it was so good! Oh, the dorama, the angst, the pain, the sadness, the worry, it was so much like life that I forgot it was just a story and not Real Life! (At least not to \"outsiders\"!) This story was like a slice of life, were you a fly on the wall? I hope to DEFINATELY read more from you!

*BOWS* Thank you for making Shu-chan and Yuki-chan more real than ever before to me!
PIKACHU GODDESS
(o\';\'o)

this is one of the most amazing stories i have ever read.

it does drag a bit but i am willing to way get over it.

I havea quesiton though.

is there supposed to be a chapter 9 between 8 and 10?

please tell me because i want to continue reading the story as soon as possible!

More!!!! This fic is glorious. ^^

OK, I understand WHY you did this, but I still don\'t have to like it! It\'s like gettting a lover to the point of orgasm, and then walking away. Sure, you can always finish yourself off (after you get over the shock), but it just somehow isn\'t quite what you were expecting, and therefore, not quite as satisfying. AGH! OK, there I said what I wanted, and I will still continue to read your stuff, your great, but if you jilt a lover too many times, they aren\'t happy! Please don\'t do this too us (your readers) and me (your lover in this analogy) againh!
Thanks. ;)

i enjoyed your fiction very much. very well done. =D

You are positively evil leaving off where you did! Wow, another great chapter, and thanks to the ending, I am expecting the next to be wonderful too. UGH!!! More soon please!

That was wonderful yet again. I liked how you handled the \'misunderstanding\' betweeen them without it being overdramatic. The thing I love the most about this story is how human it feels. And you are managing to tell the story with little words, through actions and some thoughts here and there; I\'m positively jealous! I have seen some things here in Yuki tht I ahdn\'t anywhere else, and that I wanted to include in my own writing, but after reading this I fail to see the point because you guys have done a marvellous job out of it, truly. It\'s how you are writing a relation tha that\'s not perfect but wants to work; how you show that Yuki does care for Shuchi but still finds him annoying and hard to deal with. It\'s perfec lov loved the update, and I\'m still wondering if this is the last we\'ll see of Shu\'s family (I doubt it). I\'m seriously looking forward the upcoming chapters, take care and excellent job as always. Bloody fantastic.

Ach! I\'m so relieved that they\'re out of that house. I was afraid Shu\'s mom\'s wicked family would do something awful to prevent them from leaving, or to try and \'stop\' or \'reclaim\' Shuichi. Your ficcy has kept my eyes glued to the screen to consume every word and to glean meaning from every nuance of words and actions. Your updates make me so happy! :D It seems to me that Yuki is slowly realizing that Shu means a great deal to him. I love the subtle development. ...And, of course, I look forward to more!