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January 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this story but being that is has been so long since it has been updated I guess I'll have to continue the story in my mind. Shinobu was my favorite character of the series but this story makes me hate her. Good job and I guess I'll hope the author sees this and gets inspired to write again.
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October 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Can you please update soon because I would like to know what is going to happen with all of them/
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January 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WTF?! This is some serious crap you have written! Update soon! This is AWESOME!
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January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice contiune with the story
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August 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE FINISH!!! I sure hope Shinobu doesn't get Keitaro. I love Shinobu/Keitaro fics normally but she's just such a caniving, shaisty little bitch. Death to Shinobu!!! (at least in this fic =-))
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January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
from one author to another, you must finish this story. so much potential and i like this evil shinobu thing. also you should add in Motoko heading to the police and ask them who would be responsible: a teen blackmailing an adult to have sex with her or the adult for doing a minor. update ASAp
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December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I see no reason to "save" Keitaro from Shinobu. She deserves him. In fact I really think he's liking being "owned" by Shinobu.
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November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey great story when will you put up another chapter and oh yes will
Keitaro be saved from shinobu and be with Motoko and Naru?
Keitaro be saved from shinobu and be with Motoko and Naru?
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October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this was a really good fanfiction. i rarely review, so i don\'t really know what to say... i think you\'re a pretty good writer and i hope the next one comes out soon. REMEMBER TO PUT A DISCLAIMER! i would cry to see such a nice quality fanfiction be deleted!
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July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey man this was really fucking good please write more please