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Love Hina

By: AmonKashino
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Love Hina

Love Hina

Written by: Thomas Hawk AKA (Amon Kashino)

Chapter 1

She just stared at him for the longest time ‘h-how?’ was all she could think, as she looked at the naked Keitaro laying next to her. He snored lightly oblivious to the outside world and while the other Hinata house residents were up and moving about he was asleep in bed with a girl he shouldn’t be in bed with.

‘I don’t understand, I mean last night he wasn’t even home’ she thought as she sat up ‘how did we end up in bed together, did we even do anything . . . we’re both naked.’

She was still thinking when there was a knock at her door “Kitsune are you up? Have you seen Keitaro?” asked Naru.

“N-no please stay o-out!” Kitsune yelped trying to ignore her hangover.

This only fueled Naru’s curiosity as the other Hinata house residents stood behind her “we are coming in you sound weird . . .” began Naru and opened the door.

“NO!” she replied and covered Keitaro while pulling the blankets up to her chest.

The other members stopped dead in their tracks when they saw Kitsune’s naked state “Oh!?” They said in surprise, “we’re sorry . . .”

They didn’t get to finish as Keitaro woke up and groaned making them look at the lump under the covers, he shifted and groggily opened his eyes ‘what the hell is this?’ he thought touching the blanket and some of Kitsune’s thigh ‘blanket and flesh . . .FLESH!?’

Everyone gasped as Keitaro shot up in bed and grabbed his head “OW! Damn my head . . .” he said and looked around “umm Kitsune?”

“KEITARO!?” the others finally screamed making Keitaro and Kitsune hold their hands over their ears.

‘What the hell! I’m naked with Kitsune, did we?’ he stopped thinking when he saw Motoko and Naru.

The past few weeks Motoko had revealed that she has feelings for Keitaro, and her and Naru have been competing for his attention. Nothing as bold as a kiss but there have been hugs and handholding every once in awhile, there was also blushing and sneaky touches of the hands or arms but when the two girls try at the same time, it erupts into a fight. No wak wakes up next to Kitsune and they are both naked, he didn’t know what to do and his head hurt too much to think.

‘I’ve usually never been that drunk, have I given up my virginity to Keitaro? Oh god and I can’t even remember’ she thought and began crying while Keitaro being the nice guy he was tried to comfort her.

Seeing Keitaro pull Kitsune into a naked hug only fueled the hurt and anger within Motoko and Naru, they didn’t know what to do so they stormed out before they got violent. Su and Sarah didn’t seem to understand what was going on so they left to play, while Haruka had to hold Shinobu when she began to cry and eventually led her away from the room.

“Kitsune?” Keitaro asked after awhile.

She only sniffled at him so he continued “Kitsune I don’t remember what happened, did we . . . have sex?”

She sniffled a few more times before looking up at him “I don’t know, I can’t remember even seeing you last night . . . Keitaro do you love me?”

‘Where the hell did that come from?’ they both thought and Keitaro tried to think about his relationship with her “W-well I don’t kno mea mean I could because I do find you attractive but I’m not sure of my feelings right now.”

She hugged him tighter and Keitaro was glad that his member didn’t seem to want to play when he felt Kitsune’s nipples against his flesh, after awhile they got dressed and blushed at each other. He gave her a nervous kiss on the cheek before leaving for his room, while Kitsune decided to go talk to the others who she found in the living room all except Su, Sarah and Motoko.

Naru glared at her, Haruka seemed unbiased, and Shinobu just sniffled lightly “Umm guys I’m sorry about that . . . but Keitaro and I don’t remember anything that happened”

“R-really?” asked Shinobu looking at her.

“Yeah, the last time I remember seeing him was when he left to go find a job” she replied and looked to Naru “I’m sorry Naru you know I wouldn’t purposely do that to you . . .”

“I’m to angry to talk to you right now” she said and got up to leave.

Minutes earlier Keitaro had walked into his room only to be greeted by a teary eyed Motoko; she looked at him sadly “why?”

“I don’t know, I don’t even remember doing anything . . . Motoko believe me I wouldn’t have done that to you, I didn’t want to hurt you . . .”

“Yes I know,” she said while thinking ‘I must be forward with Keitaro just as Kitsune has done, if I don’t I may lose him and I can’t think of what it would be like without him.’

Keitaro was expecting an outburst of rage but instead Motoko leaned forward and kissed him, which caused him to wrap his arms around her and kiss back without thinking.

‘His lips are so soft, am I kissing him right? He doesn’t seem to mind’ she thought and began to relax.

Keitaro licked which made Motoko nervously open her mouth to let him in, his tongue found its way in and lazily played with hers ‘she smells so good and I’m getting turned on from this kiss!?’

They had both been unconsciously touching each other and moaning, their breathing was getting shallower and their kissing grew more passionate.

The kiss seemed to break to soon for them both but Motoko had questions still and Keitaro decided he needed to calm down “Keitaro would you like it if I give myself to you?”

He nodded numbly because he as too shocked to say anything “would you love me even after my innocence is gone?”

“M-motoko I want to be with you b-but I can’t . . . at least not now” he said noticing her face take on a depressing mask.

“Why Keita . . . I mean Kei-kun?”

‘Kei-kun!? She really cares about me but what about Naru and Kitsune . . .’ he sighed “because even if I have feelings for you I still have some for Naru and now with what happened with Kitsune . . .”

“I understand Kei-kun, I’ll wait until you are ready”

“I’m ready now but I don’t want to do this with mixed feelings, and I don’t want you to regret it”

She smiled slightly and kissed him again, “it’s ok Kei-kun I can wait for you”

Naru was going to see Keitaro when she saw Motoko come out looking happy, her smile faltered when she saw Naru and she blushed before walking away. Keitaro was changing into some fresh clothes when Naru came in apparently even angrier than before, she looked at him while he was still only in his boxers and jumped to conclusions.

To the casual observer it would seem that Keitaro was launched out of a cannon from his room window, when in reality Naru in her anger punched him so hard he never thought he would land.

Kitsune was sitting outside looking at a bottle of sake wondering if she should take a drink when Keitaro landed next to her “Oh are you ok?” she asked helping him up.

“I’m fine, it happens all the time you know that”

“Keitaro I was wondering what will happen now” she said sitting back down as he sat next to her “I mean what if we did do ‘it’? Would you still go after Naru and Motoko or would I be your girlfriend?”

“I-I don’t know . . . I seriously don’t know” he said laying down on the grass “and having to choose between three beautiful girls may sound fun to someone else, but the other two who I don’t pick will hate me and I don’t want that.”

“There is no way to get around that, the one you chose is going to be in a tight spot as well Kei-kun”

‘Why is everyone calling me Kei-kun today!?’ he thought as Kitsune laid down next to him “I still want to try, I just don’t like being the bad guy.”

“I know Kei-kun but I’ll have to accept what you decide, I’ve made my choice now I can only wait for your choice and be ok with what you decide.”

Keitaro was about to answer when they heard Shinobu calling everyone in for breakfast, they didn’t mean to cause an uproar but they did when they came in together. Motoko and Shinobu seemed saddened while Naru seemed to get angrier; the others remained unbiased as they sat down. The breakfast table was eerily quiet as they ate until Kitsune broke the silence “I just want to apologize for what Kei-kun and I . . .” she didn’t get to finish when she said that.

“KEI-KUN!?” screamed Naru and Motoko seemed to get angry also “what the hell do you think you are doing by calling him that?”

“Naru I . . .” she tried.

“You what? Decided that since you stole Keitaro from me that you have the right to call him that!” she said standing up ready to fight.

Kitsune stood up but backed away timidly “Kei-kun” she whispered.

Seeing her in trouble he immediately tried to be the nice guy and jumped in between them and Kitsune grabbed into his shoulders and hugged his back, ‘why is she so timid now?’

“Naru settle down please,” asked Keitaro but that only angered her as it looked like he was taking Kitsune’s side.

“Why are you protecting her? Is that all I had to do to get you to love me was sleep with you!?” she screamed.

“Naru I don’t want er ofr of you hurt” he said and looked to Motoko “please you three have to stop fighting”

“Keitaro why . . . why!?” asked Naru and finally broke down into tears.

Once again, Keitaro tried to be the nice guy and rushed to her side, which just ended up causing more problems, everyone was talking all at once and Keitaro couldn’t think.

It got quiet and then he thought of his solution ‘I’ll leave and let things cool off! And try to figure out who I want . . .’ he sighed and pulled his jacket off the back of his chair and put it on “I’m leaving”

“I’ll be back later” and he headed for the door and they were to shocked to stop him, by the time they recovered, he was gone.

He had been gone all day just wandering around town trying to figure out what to do ‘I’ll eventually have to choose, but who do I choose . . . damn it!’ he mentally thought of his relationship with each girl as he sat on a bench in the park.

‘Naru was the first girl I liked . . . well the one I liked the most, she’s beautiful and I have feelings for her but is it anymore?’ he looked up at the darkening sky ‘why do I have to t do this? I can’t choose between them I just can’t . . . I’ll leave!’

He sat up straight and began talking to himself “if I leave then they can move on, they may hate me at first but they’ll get over it . . . I’ll just leave right now!” he looked in the general direction of Hinata house “goodbye”

“Goodbye” that’s what he had said three months ago and Keitaro was still undecided and hoping things were better now as he stood at the bottom of the Hinata house steps “damn I just can’t decide, I hope they have moved on . . .” he said.

He had grown about five centimeters taller which had surprised him, he had stubble along his chin and jaw giving him a rugged look, his body was slightly more muscled from all the hiking and walking, his hair was longer almost to his shoulders. He gave up the glasses and got contacts, and his voice was slightly deeper, he was less clumsy and almost looked like Seta but without glasses and longer hair but even with all this change he was still undecided about the girls.

He sighed as he started up the steps ‘I wonder what’s changed since I’ve been gone, I wonder if the girls have given up on me . . .’

He got to the door and knocked just to be safe and his aunt answered it “Seta!?”

“No it’s me Keitaro,” he said grinning.

“Where the hell did you go, you just disappeared and had us all worried!” she screamed which surprised him.

The noise caused the other residents to come downstairs as Haruka dragged him into the living room; the girls were coming down the stairs trying not to trip over each other.
When Kitsune looked up, she knew it was Keitaro and the old fire that he had ignited within her before he left just exploded like a volcano “Damn!”

This made the others look and all the girls jaw dropped while Keitaro scratched the back of his head and chuckled, blushing slightly and Motoko was the first to reach him as she uncharacteristically jumped on him and kissed him as he held her butt.

She had her legs wrapped around his waist while kissing him ‘god he’s just gotten hotter since he left, I’m so glad he’s alive . . .’ and she began to cry out of happiness.

Shinobu felt her old crush come back full force and then get worse because of his new appearance, Kitsune and Naru were waiting their turn to kiss him but Motoko didn’t plan on letting him go any time soon. There was also questions coming from every direction that weren’t getting answered, Motoko just wouldn’t let go so Naru and Kitsune pulled Motoko off of Keitaro but they didn’t notice him disappear, when they looked up he was gone “where’s Kei-kun” they asked and looked around “where’s Shinobu!?”

In the kitchen Keitaro fought half heartedly as Shinobu kissed him “please Keitaro I need to touch you”, she said while sticking her hand down his pants “I love you . . . I know I never told you but I do!”

Shinobu had never felt so horny in her life and she couldn’t stop herself from touching Keitaro, she had undone his pants and began stroking his now hardened member “wait S-shinobu stop” he breathed as she touched him but he hadn’t hardly even seen a girl in the months he was gone.

“Sempai I can’t please I’ve never felt like this,” she begged and began to cry “I can’t stop I love you. Don’t you understand?”

“Wait Shinobu we can’t you’re to young, it’s wrong . . . please we’ll talk later . . .”

She pulled away reluctantly and looked down as she cried while he put his pants back on ‘what the hell was that!?’ he thought to himself as he walked back towards the living room where they were looking for him.

Naru looked around while Kitsune looked under the couch and Motoko was watching Kitsune with a raised eyebrow but when she saw Keitaro she was on him again. After fighting off the girls and hiding behind his aunt, things began to calm down; everyone sat down and acted somewhat civil.

“Well I missed you guys so that’s why I came back” he said and looked at each one of them “I couldn’t stand to see you fight so I left hoping you would move on . . . I just can’t choose between you three.”

“Why Kei-kun” one of them asked.

“Because I love you all and I don’t want the others to hate me if I pick someone else, so I decided to not choose” he said and they looked confused “I’m not going to choose to have either of you girls, I’m staying single.”

“WHAT!?” they screamed.

“Kei-kun this isn’t fair how am I suppose to live without you?” asked Kitsune.

He sighed not wanting to be the bad guy but it was for the best “you’ll have to do exactly what you did when you didn’t like me . . .”

“But we can’t just forget you Keitaro please!” begged Naru

He sighed “Naru how would you feel if I just chose Motoko?” he said and watched her face falter “it hurts to think of seeing me kissing her, making love to her . . . doesn’t it?”

“Yes” she replied quietly.

“See I can’t do that to you girls so if I don’t choose then you’re all still equal and it may hurt but not as much as it would if I chose” he sighed as the girls began to cry “I’m sorry” he said as he left for his room.

“Wait Kei-kun you said you would talk to me” said Shinobu following him.

He sat in his room with Shinobu as she served him some sake “Sempai why can’t you love me?”

He took a sip of sake and looked at her “because you are to young and even if you weren’t you’d be in the same boat as the other girls.”

“I’m sorry sempai”

He was about to ask what she was sorry for but then felt light headed before passing out; Shinobu let a tear slide down her cheek as she began undressing herself and Keitaro.

(A/N: Umm this is interesting, no?)
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