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January 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You pretty imaginative Amon...alot of lemon! u pervert!
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December 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
O.o... Okay good fic, just that OMFG!!!!!!! SHINOBU PRACTICALLY RAPED KEITARO!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OMFG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WOW! Can\'t wait to see where this is going!
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November 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
LOL Man this is getting good, who would have thought Sninbo had it in her lol, must write more on this you must
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September 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ARGHH! THE RUN-ON SENTENCES! THEY BURNS US, PRECIOUUSSS! Anyway, it's good yes, but it isn't properly written and it's quite rushed. A lot of the sentences are run-on ones, and there's a severe lack of commas/other punctuation.
It's good, but it needs to be a little more... Graduated.
It's good, but it needs to be a little more... Graduated.
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September 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great fic wish there were more love hina fics but this is the best so far
hope for more chapters hopefully some keiterox all the girls for once
hope for more chapters hopefully some keiterox all the girls for once
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July 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
please update soon
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July 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey great fic like your other one i like the hole forceful shinobu deal makes for a great story plot hope you update soon please :-D
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June 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m Lovin\' It! :) I hate the McDonald\'s Song :P Anyways UPDATE!
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June 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
good story.love it but update sooner please
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June 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is truly awesome. I like the fic a lot! Keep it coming, the fic needs a more solid ending.