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Why does it scare me that I would SO buy that T-Shirt? (Shakes head.)
OKAY! Chapter review. Whoo, this chapter amused me so damn much. This has to be the highlight of my day, despite the fact I kept getting interrupted to do household tasks. (Shakes fist.) Regardless of my countless interruptions, I thoroughly enjoyed the chappter~! Is it just me and Zil, or is Uke!Sanzo the sexiest thing ever? I wanna whip him~. (Cough.) But Konzen made me laugh so hard. He\'s such a weird, but sexy character. He needs to stop hanging around his aunt. Now I don\'t hate him that much, it\'s Gonou who now pisses me off. I was shocked about the next encounter with Gojyo and Hakkai, I didn\'t expect him to do that at all. And Hakkai\'s counting made me go...woah. That is one smart dude.

And I have to say, a semi-drunken Hakkai is a site to behold.

I could imagine his expression and see the picture perfectly with the way you described his behavior. And that\'s what I love about your fiction~! Your usage of imagery is friggin\' awesome. And the character\'s personality is dead on. I love youuuuu~. ;_; (Loves on.)

You keep writing, I keep reviewing! Same as always. And remember! I still will inflict serious pain on you if this is not continued! But not enough to make you incapable of writing, cause that\'d be stupid. (Pets and hands a blue ribbon.) First prize in \"Clojaku\'s Favorite Authors,\" don\'t lemme down! Kiss, kiss!

---Clojaku.

You\'re Sanzo is amazing. I truly love this story. And this chapter was just hot! I\'m a sucker for GokuxSanzo. Keep it up!

Deliciously wonderful my dear and a lovely early christmas present for me too. I loved the deep tissue massager and the scene by the fire was so tender and sweet and yet naughtily erotic (they said the magic words too, I almost missed them, you sneaked them in, clever) We also saw Sanzo\'s protective side coming out too and I like Konzen trying to work on Sanzo about both Hakkai and Goku (he doesn\'t give up does he? Being such a daddy to Gaiden Goku must have made him think that Goku hasn\'t grown up). I also liked the hints about Gonou being a bit of a man-whore; we don\'t hear much about him generally, only that he was a teacher and had Kanan, I\'m looking forward to this gap being filled. Also I noticed the reminder that Hakkai doesn\'t remember ALL of his abusive past, unlike Gojyo which gives a hint of explanation why the Hakkai-mind is a bit suspicious/scathing of Gonou-mind.
Rambling now ... the scar and labor pains, re-birth, conceiving in blood, motherly, Oedipus complex, it\'s all very complicated, but gives me loads to think about and speculate on. Thrills
I\'ve started to use ensoulled in regular speech now and the phrase \"Hakkai was going nuts\" made me laugh ... I don\'t know why, maybe I\'ve been alone with the liquor chocolates too long.

Keep going and going, I\'m loving every minute of this. Hope you had a good Christmas and a great New Year

Well it is nice to know that on some level a reference to me was made! ;) You did a great job of \"fixing\" this so that I don\'t have to skin you now! I\'m so glad my internet is up and running again so I can read these wonderful bits of imagination. Nice touch with the Sanzo thing and I hope this is going where I think it is..... but let me get back to reading so I can be the judge of that!
Love Ya....Mean It!

Why you...you wonderful writer you. What an great ability you keep displaying; projecting emotions via atmosphere, dialogue, etc. so masterfully. This chapter had everything, from humor to heart-wrenching. Such a wicked sense of humor you have, I just loved the \'Shrek\' parts and the imagery of Sanzo building a snowman had me alternately rolling with laughter and \'aw\'-ing. I\'ve always liked how you bounce between scenes and characters, and this chapter had a lovely balance of bouncing while maintaining interest in each little scene; something that I find to be a rarity in ficcies ^_^ Great chapter, and although I have to say I tend to go for the more angsty scenes, I completely melted when Gojyo and Hakkai finally said \'IT\'. Not to mention the sweetness in Sanzo that you display in such an IC way, it\'s frightening. I know I\'ve said it before, but I think you\'ve grasped Sanzo\'s personality immaculately; although he seems like/is a bit of a cold-hearted bastard, we all know he\'s got a nice creamy *grins* center, don\'t we? Anyway, lovely job, ever looking forward to reading more from you. Happy holidays!

Hehe, another wonderful chapter CJ, I really enjoyed this one. The growing trust and intimacy between Hakkai and Gojyo was shown really well and I found it very Sweet. The lonliness Goku experienced was a rather powerful experience, almost as if one was there. Also the inner turmoil Sanzo deals with was very clear. But I think my favorite parts have to be the intimate moments between Hakkai and Gojyo. I can\'t wait to see what more you will add to this very fascinating fanfiction and journey. ^.^V

This has to be my favorite chapter of all. Time. You have no FRIGGIN\' idea how much I was cracking up during this chapter. That song will remain in my head all day. CURSE YOU! (Falls off chair laughing.) Sanzo The Blonde Haired Priest...Har...

That little pad thing was friggin\' funny and sexy at the same time. Hakkai is such a loveable tease! I just kept imagining all the crap Gojyo probably felt during that experieince. Poor thing was probably going insane. Hahaha, I\'m in stitches.

How is it you can make me want to molest Goku even more so than I already want to?! Your ability to create such strong emotions in your writing is so enviable. I felt so bad for him! Sitting there in his sleep and trying to call out to Sanzo. Naaaa, I want to hug him! I\'ll be your sun! (Sniff.)

And yet again, I want to sock Konzen. Even if he\'s just fucking with Sanzo. He\'s so damn annoying! Haha, Sanzo\'s getting a taste of his own medicine. Poor priest.

...Tenpou and nitrogen.. That does NOT mix well.

Funny, whenever I read this, I\'m talking to a friend of mine and we just OBSESS over this fic. We love you so much! ..COOL! I\'m your master! Hahaha! (Cracks whip.) Update soon! (Love bites and waves.)

Happy Holidays!!!


----Clojaku

You\'ve done it yet again. You fic has brought tears to my eyes, ruined a good pair of panties and brought about a nice inner warm glow. I will never look at a snowman again without snickering! Plus I loved the Saiyuki inspired Carol, its a miracle nobody was shot. I truly say all of your hard work shows in the love and detail you put into your fic. Hmm, Nitro in candles??? Talk about getting more bang for your buck, hehehe. Speaking of banging, heh, excellant lemon. I can\'t wait to see what you bring us, the loyal readers next. I hope Santa brings you many Saiyuki presents, you truly deserve them! Happy Holidays to all!!!!

Hello and welcome to Zil\'s Review. >_>;

You are one of the few people who can make me squeal when reading a fanfiction. Squeal. Ya\' know. Like a piggie.
The whole snowman gig and the Rudolf parody was great. I haven\'t laughed so much in a long, long time. Kudos to you~!
I was about an hour into the fiction, and I was surprised to see that I wasn\'t even halfway done. You really do a good, lengthy job on each one of your chapters, and I envy your skills as an authoress~!

On a second note, Konzen needs to just shut the hell up. We all know he wants to do Goku, but he probably never got to it, so he\'s taking out his anger on Sanzo. :B

On a third note, I\'m gonna join Clojaku in leaving reviews for every chappu you do. :O

-Waves hello to Clo.- :O

Well, this has been Zil with her daily rant. Woohoo~!

And remember, childeren. Never let your Sanzos stare at the raining sky for too long~! They might drown. Like uhm. A turkey.

Gods. How many ways can I say how much I adore this fic? The build-up in this chapter was outstanding, the way you bounced between scenes until it came to a whirlwind climax...just lovely. As always, your atmosphere was astounding; and as always, you manage to make each chapter better than the one before. I had several favorites from this chappie, but I\'d have to say my top two scenes were Hakkai all muddy and lost, and Gojyo playing the guitar. The image of Hakkai was so heartwrenching...and making us poor readers remember Tenpou from the previous chapter, you clever author, you. Your set-up made it that much more poignant, and I found myself cheating and trying to read ahead to see what happened. The entire scene with the Faythe and Gojyo taking her \'home\' was very, very well-written as well. I loved the initial scene of the \'mother\' figure opening the door and enfolding him in a hug ^_^ Anyway, I could go on and on about this lovely little fanfic. Outstanding job, looking forward to more!