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I say we kill that damn Flaxen bitch! -Readys pitchfork and torch.- Ahahaha.

Yea Kougaiji! I hope Gojyo will forgive Hakkai! I was gaping throughout the whole chapter. And the little conversation between Kenren and Gojyo made me laugh my ass off. "Blablabla" "Yep." "Blablabla" "Yep." XD I love the general! He's such a little ass. But I really hate bimbo blonde lady. -Sniff.- Poor Gojyo-San. Yaone shall save him!

And the appearence of Nii! Yeaaaa! Nii is awesome! And Bunny!

Ah, only you can portray the Saiyuki boys so well in a fanfiction with yaoi and make it not UNBELIEVABLY OOC. If you ever stop writing this fiction, I will take it upon myself to hunt you down and force you to write. ^nd jnd just as a joke, use the tactics Flaxen used! Giggu~.

But you better write more, or else you'll have a pissy fan knocking at your door! ^_~


-Lovebites.- UPDATE SOON!

-Clojaku

Ack, I am a sick person. I found that chapter gripping and you were right about the car crash thiI reI read it at work again on the e-mail and it gripped and made lots of spelling mistakes in my documents. It was graphic but you gave lots of warnings and it had me thinking about it as I trip-trapped to the coffee machine to calm down. It pushes the line just enoguh but makes the wounds healable, I think death and dismemberment is indeed my line. However it has one negative effect, I who am usually quite patient am now begging you to update, it's so sad. I want healing and Hakkai healing at that. Please please please. I know you're busy but think of our redhead suffering! It's made me hop skip and jump for the next installment. I have chocolate sugar cookies in my bag (new batch, orange and cinnamon) and can get some to you in less than a week. Pretty please

Hey, since we're sharing TMI on a personal level...I own a copy of Soty of O! Love it! Excellent chap. I was so excited to see a new chapeter posted I've stayed up way past my bed time to read. Thank you thank you thank you. I too read at work. How else will I ever stay "on task"? Hope you're getting settled after the Big Move. Thanks for the great story and keep up the good work.

For some reason this chapter moved me, and I'm a big Gojyo fan, so what does that say about me. I figured I would respond to this chapter since you seemed to be really worried about it. It was good, most authors stay away from torture, for the reasons you stated. Sometimes it just needs to be written, and then to draw back on the Pavlov theory again was a nice touch. To write the emotions, inner thoughts and to keep the action going is hard to do. I'm really liking this story so far. The cliffhangers keep me comming back for more. Please update when you get the chance. I only wish, if I ever dabble into fanfiction, that I can do it as good as you.

Shinigami2278

Oh dear god... I almost started crying for poor Gojyo while reading that chapter. (Sign #1 that you are too into an anime series: You cry when the chtersters are tortured in fanfics.) As for the hardest part to write being the bunny part, I think that has to be because honestly, people lose themselves when writing violence because they disconnect themselves. a p a person has to start thinking of what to say a wri writing violence makes the writer think back to just how they wrote the scene. Humans like to think that they are above violence, and when they get the chance to be violent, they look back and can't believe the horror.

Oftentimes, I feel the best writing crosses a few lines. Yours trampled a few boundries. I am speechless... floored, and in awe. This was incredibly deep, psychologically thought out and really well organized into something that gave me the chills and still left me unable to look away. You used really nice syntax in the repitition and the importance of the inner personas... but oh goodness... that last part gave me absolute chills. I can't wait to read your next part but I know I'll be bawling through it. And, above all, you created another variable within the relationship that still keeps them in character. ...wow... forget studying tonight. Just... hoooo I need to take a breath. I might start bawling now.

On to your response to the review... jeez. Happy thoughts. I totally invision a bunch of us getting together at some con and getting into some incredibly deep conversation about the meaning of life through saiyuki and stuff... I already got into a mini one with my lit teacher who has no idea about Saiyuki... :) but whatever. I would love to do that... that'd be soooo much fun. Definately.

Good luck with the surgery and everything!

- Hakuryuu (gyu!)

Ohmyfuckingod! "Complicated" indeed. So, while my husband and the rest of the east coast is screaming at the tv (game 7 Red Sox vs Yankees), I am at the computer trying to tune him out so I can focus on something important; devouring your fine story. And now I'm going to crawl off to bed and probably lie there obsessing over what just happened to my Kappa, and where it'll go from here. I see much angst in the future... I'll have to re-read some of the previous, more light hearted chappies to cheer myself up. In particular, I loved the bit in the jeep with the laughing fit from hell. I've been in the thralls of something like that before. I was quite nervous when I read your notes at the begining about how much is too much. But I gotta say, I think you did a hell of a job. I spent a lot of time twitching and wincing. It was descriptive enough to make me wince, but not so gory as to make me hurl. I can't say I "enjoyed" it, but you did a remarkable job. However, I will be glad when we can get back to the more pleasant love-making between Crimson and Emerald. Even when they're being kinky, smutty, and slutty they're still "making-love". Definately. Keep up the amazing work (bows to the author).

New twists, new twists *cheers*. I especially liked the way you did Hakkai and Gojyo's thoughts; excellent job making it just 'like a car crash'. This ficcies is so wickedly funny...you had me giggling like an idiot with Gojyo's interspersed 'comments' to Kenren. Lovely job, nice mix of humor, sex, action, and gore. ee cee cheers for the gore *cheers again*. Ever eager for more!

Hurrah, Gaiden goodness and yes I read it at work *slaps wrist*. I did read it again when I got home though. Aww a rule book as a memory book takes me back to younger days. I enjoyed the smashing up idea and the sweatdropping Goujun.
How brutal? Umm well I'm a kinky bugger so like the others death and dismemberment is probably my line. (The books you mentionned in one of the chapters, I recognised most of the titles ... er ...you didn't need to know that)

I look forwards to your next installment and suggest sending you gingerbread shapes (hopefully stars and smileys if I can find my cutters and wine-bottle rolling pin).

Hurrah, Gaiden goodness and yes I read it at work *slaps wrist*. I did read it again when I got home though. Aww a rule book as a memory book takes me back to younger days. I enjoyed the smashing up idea and the sweatdropping Goujun.
How brutal? Umm well I'm a kinky bugger so like the others death and dismemberment is probably my line. (The books you mentionned in one of the chapters, I recognised most of the titles ... er ...you didn't need to know that)

I look forwards to your next installment and suggest sending you gingerbread shapes (hopefully stars and smileys if I can find my cutters and wine-bottle rolling pin).