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Mmmm...this chapter was spicy. xD

The little rule-book thing was very cute - play-doh is fun :p I should...sculpt some time as well. Oddly enough next Semester I'll actually be taking sculpture. Damn. I'm going to have fun with that. *falls over*

Kenren and Tenpou are just to hot for their own good O.o;

Gojun really needs to have better cover-ups~ Or maybe one time he should just tell out the truth. And um, the 'wtf moment' was a good wtf. No worries, it just took me by surprise~ I'll elaborate more when I gy lay lazy ass to type an email.

I'd also have to say, the line is also just shy of death and dismemberment. Because I'm just that kinky. >.>

So, good luck with your move ^^. I hope everything goes well!

That...was...AWESOME! I feel like Chris Farley, "Remember that time when Kenren and Tenpou...That was awesome..."
I love the concept. I also agree with other reviewers that your story is about as close to "in character" as you can get any still have naughty grown-upion.ion. Also, about the future chapter, I'm in the Just Shy of Death and Dismemberment camp. Go, go, go! You . sh.

You've done it again. Hi-larious. Amazing! You never stop raising the bar. The little "fight" scene... lol. And does Gojun have a liiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiittle crush on somebody??? Or is he just, um, upset? Lol. Nice job with the characterizations and such (like al... al... WOW I just got the Gojun thing. Like, Hakuryuu? Wow. Way late on *that* bandwagon. >< hooooooeeeeeee. :) Very nice all the same. Seems like he grew up a little in his next life tho ;)). 8's were hilarious... 888.H... gonna remember *that* one! And the stuffed animal thing??? oooh am I gonna have a story to tell you ;). Yeek what e It It was all so brilliant I can't even start. Go Tenpou/Kenren. Just go them. They kick butt.

And as for going too far... you know me, I'd tell you to do what you felt, and you can tone it down for others but KEEP the original. On the other hand, I love my boys and would *hate* to see them hurt lol. But I think you should do whatever's best for the plot ;). Good luck and merry writings!

So sorry, this would have been longer but it's midnight and I'm exhausted. Goodnight!

- Hakuryuu (gyu!)

n.n;; I really SHOULD of reviewed much sooner, I've consistantly checked this story ever since the second chapter was put out, and am NOW finally reviewing? God, I'm so lazy.

Ahem. -Straightens up and looks profesional.-



DEAR GOD I LOVE YOU! ALL TIME FAVORITE AUTHORESS EVER. FIVE STARS. A+. TWO THUMBS UP. MARRY ME! ;____;


Okay, maybe that was going to far.

How brutal is too brutal? Kuku, I'm up for anything. Just...Don't end up killing them. Crying doesn't make me happy.

I'm so sad you won't update for a bit, I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. I'm deeply impressed that you're able to create such DAMN good lemons and not have them seem repetitive. You're the only authoress I've seen do this, which is probably why I keep reading. It's such a thrill reading your fictions, since you never know what'll happen next! So, I hereby claim myself to review every chapter from now on, because you DAMN well don't get the credit you deserve. -AWE.-

-Sits down and refreshes page repetitively for next update.-

Loves it!


-Clojaku

Oh... goodness.

This was awesome. Just awesome. I don't know how you put that much frickin AMAZING porn (and that many four + syllable words) into that fic, but you did, and I definately give it my gold (or white? gyu!) seal of approval. Were there a Nobel Porn Prize, you would win, hands down.

Oh wow... XD this was hilarity. At it's finest. Well, not when they were blasting holes in the wall (although, I could just *imagine* Gojyo's little I'm-so-sexy-but-I'm-in-so-much-pain-don't-you-wish-you-were-me-Sanzo-kun SMIRK on his face XD) but other times.. ohh... okok ok the thing with the deck of cards - you are bomb. You captured a lot of the spirit with that, I'll have you know... and you may be rolling with laughter when you see a later Reload ep. XD I know I sure am. And the bells... Lilin's bells... XD hooooooo! Too funny.

I'll email you more in-depth about the con, but I met a woman there and we were discussing some of the finer parts of the series... and, in short, we totally agree with you about Goku. That was the consensus we came to as well :).

Sanzo... oh! When he was finally 'hanging with the guys' thing... that was awesome. I just finished watching Teen Titans (which is my new fix lol it's pretty good!) it reminded me of Raven and her I'm-stoic-but-I'd-kinda-almost-maybe-like-to-be-one-of-the-"gang" complex). Wonderful.

XD I just loved the entire thing. I know I'm forgetting halves and millions and every such thing that I wanted to say about this fic... oh dear it was one of those lines about the monkey or something >< darnit! Anyway, hilarious!

Speaking of which...

I almost died when... um... a certain number was mentioned. I laughed out loud... both times... for a loooooong time. hooo... and the 4 and 4... was that purposeful? Veeeeery tricky with that math... XD. I won't be able to hear the word... er... yeah, for a LONG time without laughing uncontrollably.

Oh! And did I say the HP thing? Fantastic. Sure, you can use it! I just need to remember to set my emails to save sent messages ><. Lol I cannot even wait.

And I just remembereI liI liked what you did with the Sanzo/Goku thing. I really did. You took a very creative spin on it... and it completely and plausably worked. :) Kudos to you!!!!

I'll email you soon, but in the meantime good luck with your move and keep writing!

- Hakuryuu (gyu!)

Hello lemonade! This was a really steaming chappy. I loved the cute way that Goku took control and how their relationship changed. I also thought you did an excellent job 'taking us there' with Sanzo. However confident and strong-willed he may seem in the series, behind closed doors would be a different, even more complex story. Long explanation short: I found it to be an interesting and IC perspective on Sanzo. And Gojyo and Hakkai f-ing like bunnies...well, what's not to like? One thing that stands out for me is the constant back-fortforth between Hakkai and Gojyo. I love the dynamics of their relationship as you've written it, especially sinccan'can't picture either of them 'laying back and taking it' (which makes for some extremely yummy lemons); in other words, I love how they keep playfully trying to outdo (no pun...lol) each other. Oh, and the cute little dragon lime was adorable ^_^ Anyway, lovely chapter, as usual. Eager for more!

I loved it! Thought it was brilliant and that I shouldn't be reading it in a communual computer room *sweatdrop*. Although I do think that flame was a little harsh, it wasn't really constructive criticism at all, just a lot of slagging off. It's not nice when people flame-blast things to eternity just because they don't like your take on it. And you mentioned cookies woo...
Don't take the flame to heart, your writing is good, kinky and yummy. Even if you lose one reader, you have a loyal fan base over here. I like your take on it and I await the Kenren and Tenpou addendum with a shake 'n vac dance on standby

Man, you've done it again!!!!!! This one trultruly the Superbowl of Saiyuki lemons!!!!! It's Gojyo/Goku vs Sanzo/Hakkai.
You did a wonderful job caputuring the blow by blows (laughs manically to self hahhah)
And its not just the lemons, but the essence of the Saiyuki Camraderie that you do so wonderful a job of capturing! Your storytelling has great depth and feeling, without going off into OOC land. Your fics should come with following warning labels:


"Warning the following stories will hurl your emotions and libido over a cliff. You will experience a slight dizziness as you laugh you ass off at the Saiyuki guys adventures. Undies will be ruined in the process. You have been warned, and feel free to pass these wonderful stories off to all you friends."

I can't wait to see what's next. Truly wonderful story writing. Thanks for making my day!

Good Heavens but that was good. No, not good. Great! I don't know which pairing was hotter. *drinks a huge glass of cold water to cool down* My, oh my!! I am not sure why I haven't reviewed before now but I must address this now. This was simply awesome. Thanks so much for sharing with us. I love how "everyone" becomes a part of the show (so to speak!) And I must say I loved Goku being so forceful. “How’s this, Priest, nasty enough for ya?” Oh my, my my!! All in all a great job and I am really enjoying this. Wil there be more? I sure hope so!!

O.o;

You updated so soon. xD It usually takes more than 2 weeks or so for most authors to do. Dedicated, or just in the mood for smut, hm? Heh. Well you've impressed me again. Thoroughly. You made me cry, laugh, and simply go 'wtf' this chapter.

The little dragon bit, was immensly cute. About time the little MAN dragon got in on some action. *falls over*

You portrayed the Goku/Sanzo bit just about as cannon as you can get. It was simply gorgeous.

And it was about time Goyjo got a rough fuck. I can't just get enough of Hakkai's demon form :p

You've made my day by writing this, a great way to spend a Friday evening, hot chocolate, and fanfiction.

Mmm.

You have my thanks.