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I really liked the latest chapter of this...I thought you did a nice job with the certain artistic liberties you took ^_^ They added a lot to the ficcie, and hell, who DOESN'T enjoy a little angst? Once again, you churn out one of the hottest lemons I've ever read *fans 'self*. I think they make such an impact because they are so original; it shows that you go to great lengths to avoid writing a cliched sex scene, and gods do I appreciate that! Excellent, excellent job. I can't wait for more. Really I can't. I'm wasting away as we speak ^_^ Keep up the great work.

XD Fantastic. Absolutely Fantastic. You've definately pushed the bar again - and I love it. I get so wrapped up in reading your fics that I forget fic fic-dom and start thinking otherwise. Absolutely amazing.

...Lets see if I can remember all of this.

1) That dirty conversation was awesome. Absolutely awesome. I almost died laughing. That is so much fun to do... and to see Hakkai get a kick out of it too XD man that kid needs to loosen up like that a lot more.

2) Which brings me to my second point. I liked your theory about his childhood... I know that's been theorized with Sanzo as well, but this shed a whole new light on things.

3) Which brings me to three - where do you find scanlations or manga scans + translations? I'd LOVE to get my hands on some Gaiden... I must admit, that's the one thing I'm really unfamiliar with. Since it's far easier for me to get the anime (or so I thought) I've just been basing it off of that and reading the books as they come along... but perhaps its time to change that. (If you've read the liner notes for the second book, it refers to Gojyo and Sanzo as being "bad friends"... which happens to be the name of their image song XD) So I don't really know a lot about Gaiden, how everything happened, or how Hakkai met up with Hakuryuu, but I'd loooooove to find out. Gaiden is awesome. Tenpou is god. (Which, coincidentally, he is ^^).

4) ohhh the bitchy hakkai... the best example of that is in the ep where Gojyo helps out that little girl... and Sanzo and Hakkai have the conversation, and Hakkai bets Gojyo ditched Goku for some girl... and Sanzo disagrees and POOF there's Goku and Hakkai just TURNS TO SANZO with this SMILE on his face... my goodness ithe the funniest thing ever. There's also a Hakkai ep in Gunlock that shows just how awesome he is.

5) Reading into the lines is fun. Please continue to do so. It's made for interesting conversation. :)

6) Oh yeah... Sanzo, admit anything??? XD hilarious. But I see your point, and I agree totally. And eight inches... that's funny. and even funnier that it's eight... like Hakkai.

7) Totally unrelated (but not really) but there's a reload gunlock ep with a girl who reminded me SO MUCH of Scarlet (right? That's her name, isn't it? From Of Her Nature?) I was just bowled over and had to tell you.

and finally 8) Sorry for depressing you so much with my fic ^^() I'll send you another one (it might be a little un-understandable, cuz it's kindof a friend-insertioc foc for, well, a friend) lol but it has to do with Hakkai... in a rather comedic situation. Hopefully that'll make up for it. ^^()

Please please please keep up writing. Your work is amazing and I can't wait to read more. 10k props to you!!!

From your stories, I knew you were an awesome writer. Writing lemons really is an art. To put in a plot, to make these actions believable as the character's - it takes attention to detail.

And you're good at it. Not just the lemons of course, though I must admit I completely adore those. But the jokes...oh Christ, when they had that giggle fit I was right there with them. I am never going to be able to hear the phrase "relax and hang on" without a glauglaugh.

But it's more than just the story even. The warning you wrote at the begining showed you did care about your readers, as did the note at the end. And that shows something about you as a person, not as a writer.

I hope I can enjoy many more of your works, and whenever you finally leave this behind you - for life does slowly change us all - I hope that as you continue on, you stay as wonderful as you are.

You updated! Hooray and this one was just as good. There are some fics out there that always have Hakkai just lying down for everybody and it was good that you twisted it around so he got his "revenge" so to speak and Sanzo's ass needed kicking. Also that if stuff happened in Hakkai's childhood you didn't let it distract from the actual story. I also liked the multiple personality thing and that you dealt with it in a light-hearted way. As someone who has problems with such things it was a refreshing to see it dealt with so lightheartedly rather than wallowing in the very bottom of the pit of angst.

Please put the addendum on, I'd love to hear how Tenpou and Kenren broke a bookshelf and everything.

Holds out cookie of encouragement

I knew I forgot a few things!!! One, I LOVED your transitions... they were amazing! And I'm just a bit curious (I'm sure you'll explain in the next one, but just to make sure...) what *exactly* happened between Sanzo/Goku? And... umumum... oh yes. I love Kanzeon Bosatsu. You did an excellent portrayal. :)tasttastic!!!!

Update Oh please. I beg you!

This was fantastic. There was a number of times where I absolutely laughed out loud (ie. their nicknames... the "Oh I think I'll jump off a cliff" for Hakkai XD!!!!!) but the whole thing was great. I love how Tenpou is always soooo... I dunno... bastardly? Hakkai can be pretty bitchy himself, sometimes... and that's hilarious. His more caustic side, when it comes out, is always fun to explore, ne? And poor, poor Kenren... I never thought of that ^^() little guy prolly got his butt kicked more than anyone on the battlefield! But I digress. I loved how you put more emotion into their words... it was a little unclear (I think intentionally, for part of it) when Hakkai went bac his his room and then went missing... but that was easily remedied. Poor Dragon King guy... although he seemed to really kinda mellow out as Hakuryuu, ne? What else what else... oh the part where Goku believes he's asleep... priceless. I think you've done amazingly well with all of the characters and keeping them Canon... I'd just make sure that you remember that usually Sanzo is pretty darn serious, and he has more of an understanding relationship with Hakkai. He'd prolly be more willing to accept Hakkai than Hakkai thinks, even though he'd do it in his own, stoic way... and he definately wouldn't give Gojyo an inch. :) ANYWAY! Sheesh I get long-winded sometimes! Keep it up, I'd definately check out that Honeymoon fic (check it out with a box of kleenex, though. Trust me. You'll need it.) and I can't wait to read more!!!!!

Oh I love this! It's damn sexy and makes mine ine tingle when I read it. Update quickly! You're really good at this
^_^ Mmm... Kinky Tenpou

What a great, fun read! In addition to excellent HakkaiXGojyo action *wiggles eyebrows lasciviously*, I adore your interpretation of Sanzo. Angsty Sanzo makes me sleepy. I would love to see a Sanzo-centric fic in that style. Mayhap a companion piece? A “meanwhile”? Anyway, I’ve really enjoyed these chapters. Keep ‘em coming (so to speak)!

This is freaking interesting! You wrote some fabulously steamy lemons *drools on 'self*. I loved the spin on Hakkai taking control...how hot can one scene be? I can't wait for more!

ps. Did I mention that the lemons were amazing?