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ooooooo you've done it now. Talk about making a person squirm, this fic was a killer. Multiple personalities & multiple orgasms galore. I love the way you've captured Hakkai's psychological state of mind. And you did a good job with your writing in keeping all of his personalities separate enough where the reader could tell who was in charge. Ahh Goyjo that will teach you, keep your eye on the quiet ones!! Also Sanzo's character, man I laughed my ass off! Talk about getting your freak on he's just sooooo twisted, but that's why Ie hie him. Shame on Sanzo, using his position as a monk to hit some on the side. You've done a great job, I can't wait to see what's next. Great job!

Whoa, this just gets better and better. PLEASE keep posting chapters for this one. Sanzo\'s twisted sense of humor doesn\'t surprise me in the least bit. There are so many possibilites for this storyline. I like your writing style so just keep it going (hint! hint!) ^ _ ^

Thanks for writing more ^_^ Kink is always good.

Ooh, this is good. Can\'t wait for more! Love the way you\'re toying with Hakkai\'s mind ^_^

HEY! Thanks for outlining it... it made it tons easier to understand. LOVE the second chapter, the angst, the sanzo bits, etc! Glorious, absolutely glorious. You have an uncanny ability to read into their characters and find perepheral issues that still effect them. Keep it up! I can\'t wait to read more!

The second I saw this title I knew I had to click it. \"...no entirely straight man kills demons with one hand on his hip.\" What a *good*, *good* line that is...

This was glorious. I was absolutely in love with the first one, or the \"original\", but this is really the kicker. How often do you get one of your fav. fanfics continued?!? Anyway! Characterizations are awesome... poor Hakkai, he just gets all the angst, eh? :) We wouldn\'t want it any other way. And props to Sanzo. I think you totally called it. I\'m not sure if you\'ve seen Reload yet, but there\'s one scene where he just lauuuuuughs.... when you see it you\'ll know what I mean. Anyway, I think he\'s got some terribly wicked and yet terribly funny sense of humor hidden in there somewhere... XD I bet Kanzeon laughed her head off in heaven when he was there. BUT I\'m off topic! I\'d love to see the Kenren/Tenpou development come XD just cuz I love them too... and if you\'ve never read \"Honeymoon\" on mediaminer.org (I don\'t think it\'s here) then please do. It\'s one of my favs too, but it\'s Kenren/Tenpou. One thing to work on is a little bit of transition, especially in the beginning (to show that it\'s before Hang On 1). Your detail is great, and I love how you write shorter paragraphs that switch between the two of them. It really gives a sense of action :) WAI!!!!!!!!!!!!! I just love it. Keep it up pleeeeeeeeeeease! :)