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Wow, Sanzo's pure evil in this. Not in a malicious way and it's absolutely hilarious, but still evil. This first chapter was just awesome, a magnitude above the original and completely hot.

Chapter 2 absolutely awesome. Sanzo is evil, but I'm sure he doesn't realize that he's actually hurting Hakkai. I know you said it was up to the individual to decide if there's anything going on between Sanzo and Goku. At this point, I'd say it was one-sided with Goku wanting Sanzo and Sanzo being a bit oblivious. Now, what's up with Hakuryu? If you've made him a reincarnation of someone, I think that's really cool. If that's cannon, *damn* I need to see more.

Hahahaahahaha, Hakuryuu is the Dragon King? Fitting punishment for the bull shit he pulled according to the end notes from disk 6. Tenpou's an... interesting... persona. Good to have an idea of what's going on in Hakkai's head now.

Chapter 4: Go Merciful Goddess! Interesting to note that Sanzo seems to respond well to being dominated. I don't think he's quite gotten with Goku yet, and it may be because Goku hasn't figured out this little tidbit yet. I think Goku just keeps making advances and gets rejected after Sanzo plays with his head a little. But not too much, Sanzo does care about him. I think your overall writing style for this is very good and I appreciate your word usage and spacing, it adds a lot to the story.

Chapter 5: Wasn't able to find the manga scans of demon Hakkai on Hakkai_Love, but it may have been a while since you wrote this chapter. Shit, Sanguinans is fucking scary. That was really well written, Sanguinans' obscured vision and point of view were pure grade A horror.

Hakuryuu is awesome, gotta love the dragon that doesn't even know his own strength. Tano is an interesting OC.

Chapter 6: Wow, I don't believe it! Something sqicks the Merciful Goddess! Hmmm, Sanzo feels pleasure from asphyxiation, but it's something he can't give in to. Interesting hang up, something really nasty must have happened there. I wonder if we'll find out.

Well, with that revelation of Goku's perspective, we're back to square one with figuring out his and Sanzo's sexual relationship. You're keeping us guessing on purpose and it's appreciated, though it be frustrating.

Ch 20

I've waited through the AFF nightmare of closure for this story to reappear. An I actually read this chapter when you first posted it, but then couldn't find it again.

I love the hot tub scene, there was just something about that... You captured that feeling of being overwhelmed by love so well. The scene really choked me up.

Your intricate story line is amazing and well crafted. While the characters were created by someone else, these characters in this story are definitely your creation. I commend you and fangirl you. And you inspire me to want to write Saiyuki fiction.

I hope you can find the balance in your life to continue writing. I look forward to more.

Thank you for sharing.

Des

Read it the first time but am re-reading it and it is even better! I love this and just have a big time yelling and laughing (think the neighbors are going to call the men in white coats) Let them come I am ready for them....Oh, did I say that out loud? Sorry. Love the Fic though.

Waiting, wainting, waiting, and still waiting. When you're next chapter is up, I'll be here waiting to read it, as will my sister ( for we are both somewhat addicted to your {epic?} story. It's believable, in my opinion, and every one is very much in character. You've filled in the gaps in everyone's past with a truely wonderful and satisfying read. Again, I hope to see the next chapter soon. Thanks!

Once again, outstanding. Your verbage and descriptions continue to develop and enthrall me to no end. Tenpou and Kenren remain, as always, a sharp reminder of what brought them to this point together. Tenpou\'s desire to keep his men safe, yet sacrifice himself believing it to be \"living\"....almost to the point that if you could merge some of Gonou\'s thanatos with Hakkai\'s skill of manipulation you would be almost there. I cried when you had the flash-back to *the* night. Gojyo\'s running commentary of having a normal life...his seventh birthday (he got slammed into a wall). Those secondary cues just tore at me when you realise how much he desperately wanted to live the lie he built up for himself. And the scene with Tenpuu...Leave. It. On. The. Table. That\'s Emerald\'s cup and when he wakes up from his nap he\'ll want it. A very vulnerable side we rearely see of Gojyo and probably need to. He\'s not as simple as he\'s made out to be, he\'s just not as messed up as Hakkai. I am heartened that your skill continues to improve, even since the last time I reviewed. Even though you can\'t up-date as often, I hope you do it soon. Like a certain Priest on a snowboard, this is just getting good. See you in the by-lines. lol.