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How do I tell you what I have gotten from your fiction. I love how you write and enjoy every minute of the read. The chapter was quite long but I was able to fight for the computer and win. Yeah me! The dragon and dog part was inspired. You write the characters to where you know so much about them and how they feel. It is wonderful. Very enjoyable!

I love the story so far but are u ever going to up-date? please do so soon . thank u

I have not reviewed your fanfic until now. I have read to thsi end and have enjoied everyminute of it. There have been long days and nights in front of the computer and even muffled giggles during the night so as not to wake up the houshold. You have a real knowladge of the language and I have REALLY enjoied Hakkai and Goyjo , who are my favorite caracters of all and they seem to come and visit me at night when I am asleep thanks to you .many boxes of pocky to you and some realy (good) brownies, too. Cna't wait for another chapter,,,,type little ....fingers.......type. Go cup!

Geeze, I finally get to review! Sorry RL\'s taken me away so long, not to mention a few projects that need doing. *sigh* Anyway, I really loved this chapter (CJ I haven\'t missed any other chappies have I?) It was both extremely HOT and tender. I think I teared up a time or two. *LOL* Kou is as protective of his sister as ever. I hope for the brothers\' sake that eventually some kind of reconciliation can happen. And....I enjoyed reading the interaction between all the characters too. I eagerly await for the next chapter of course when it can come...I mean be posted, sorry. The story as it always is, is very well thought out and well written, and as ever a pleasure to read. Hm....me thinks that Gojyo was maybe even a little healed? But what about Hakkai? How\'s he gonna react now? And what\'s Sanzo gonna say to Gojyo about his flirtation with dangerous things? Hm...being drunk seems to help Sanguinans get a little loose even with the restraints, ne? Gosh, there\'s so much I wanna post but I actually need to go do some work now. Keep up the good work ^.^V

^__^ I\'ve been rereading this, and I must say that I like Ah\'Nesty, I _LOVE_ the unspoken jokes and the SQUIRMING that comes from her presence, and I just like her. She\'s a very good catalyst.

However, I absolutely adore the Merciful Goddess and Jiroshin in this story. They never, never fail to make me laugh out loud, and you\'ve done an excellent job with their characters.

...I can\'t wait until I reach part 19 again.

Wow. I have to say this is one of the best Saiyuki fics I\'ve ever read. Actually, to be more accurate, it\'s one of the best yaoi fanfics I\'ve ever read. lol You\'ve certainly got a handle on the boys\' characters, and the way you have integrated their Gaiden personas into everything is really inventive and smoothly done. Über kudos for originality and innovativeness! I also don\'t know whether to be cheering for Jiroshin or Bosatsu finally having a little fun! I very much enjoy the psychological aspects you\'re presenting here. Playing with the characters\' minds is always exciting, isn\'t it? I\'m aslo quite impressed with your creativity in naming your OCs. Very original there, too. The only factor I\'m still unsure about (and this is just personal preference and opinion based on reading most of the manga and watching all the anime thus far) is the possibility of pairing up Sanzo with Hakkai and/or Gojyo. I don\'t mind it so much with their Gaiden selves, but in their current incarnations, I just don\'t see it happening. However, being a writer myself (though my most prevelant fandom happens to be Beyblade at the moment, with the odd Yu-Gi-Oh! and Digimon fic thrown in), I totally understand one\'s creative license, so ignore me. lol Write it however you want, because I promise I\'ll still be reading it! I will say I do enjoy the tension that comes up between them all because of that possiblity though. Well, well done. It took me four hours to read this whole fic to the most recent chapter, and I will be absolutely ecstatic to spend another four reading it again and again...hopefully with a new chapter coming soon? Wonderful work and please keep on writing! It\'s been a joy!

Kali
(Yami FireKali - I didn\'t log in)

Gods it takes forever to read one of your chapters, but I loved every minute. I was skeptical about the threesome, but you did it, and I loved it. Really enjoyed the SanzoxGoku stuff in this one too, and the \'I never\' stuff, genious. I must say, the biggest problem I have with the story is the past lover thing for Konzen and Tenpou, and any future possibilities of Sanzo and Hakkai going at it. now, if the others are involved, and Sanzo just happens to get his \"Hakkai is too damn sexy for his own good\" rocks off, then fine, but not a one on one. Course, that wouldn\'t happen the way you have things going, anyway, but I just want to be sure. The reason I have a problem with Tenpou and Konzen is because Konzen is a certified virgin. In the anime Tenpou may say Konzen has never known the touch of a WOMAN, but in the manga he says another PERSON. It\'s only woman in the anime because that goes better with what Kenren says just before that, but the real line is person. Just being nitpicky, you have your rights and the story is truly my favorite of all time. I especially like how you manage to fit in little things only true fans would get, having seen the whole thing. Anyway, always looking forward to more.

This chapter was so. incredibly. hot. I discovered a new kink in myself (mirrors will never be -quite- the same again, in a very nice way), and reveled in some old favorites. I think I shall be grinning at inappropriate moments all week, and I look forward to it. ^_^
Thank you very, very much for a wonderful evening read.

I\'m so glad you are back because totally YOU KICK ASS!!!

So well written, so messed up, so incredibly hot.

Well done, and thank you so much for sharing this with us.

Yay! Another chapter! I\'ve never heard of the fuzzy duck drinking game, so I think at some point I\'m going to write out the instructions for it and pass it along, if you don\'t mind. We seem to be collecting drinking games for some reason. ^_^;

I still like Ah\'Nesty; this was a one time thing, and somewhere along the way, it\'ll do some good. At least, I think so. The mirrors- LOVED them. People don\'t do enough with mirrors. Damned western body image issues, I guess. That stuff Hakkai was drinking, for some bizarre reason, cracked me up. Hakkai DRUNK cracked me up. ^_^ Goku made me proud, though. He\'s so centered, and he seems to know his limits, and it just makes me happy. I am looking forward to The Talk between Hakkai and Goku concerning heterosexual biology. I honestly don\'t know if Goku\'s even thought of that, that they could be making babies. And has Yonae talked to Lirin? (I can\'t really see Kou doing it, so I\'m just assuming...)

The dragons are just cute. :D

I understand about the word check going out. I\'m facing the same situation. But I think you\'ve done your very best, and who can ask for more? (bow) Thank you so very much. Well, my brain is trying to shut down, so I\'ll be quiet now.
~Q

Oh, wait! Was Goku\'s remark about Gojyo a deliberate prod at Sanzo? My evil little voice won\'t stop giggling manically about it as a poke at Sanzo\'s attraction to Hakkai.