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September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey love,
Wow the lemon was hot ... very nice and I like the way the threesome was handled. I also like how you snuck in Ah\'nesty\'s intentions to take Hakkai/Gonou away but learning that Hakkai isn\'t Gonou. I was also pleased to see that Hakkai gets jealous when his barriers are down.
Ah absinthe ... yes that is the traditional way to drink it. I\'ve never had the illegal stuff, but I\'ve have had the polish 95% proof stuff, usually mixed with vodka the same strength (hellshot it\'s called at the bar). The rush is quite scary, you do start to see things in detail but for some reason you can\'t touch that detail, like raindrops. I usually drink it straight or with lemonade and ice. I can be a bit of a lush though. The feeling of being drunk on absinthe -for me anyway - is the ooh-look-shiny phase and I think you portrayed that well, but with the darkness of Hakkai\'s youkai side tainting it. We don\'t see Hakkai let go very much and so I think these tightly laced emotions tend to spill out and I like how the absinthe loosened the lock. (and Hakkai\'s vine adorned endowments ^_^ made for one happily lecherous reader)
Drinking games - I liked these and would have loved to see it in the manga or the anime. I remember Fuzzy Duck from my first year and we had \"Never have I ever\" for the \"I never\" game. It was a scene I could see happening in the anime.
And congratulations to Goujun too, with his lecherous wife ^_^
I also like the mirrors scene with Goku and Sanzo. Sanzo\'s an exhibitionist really, same as Kougaiji\'s always gonna be over-protective. I think Goku\'s gonna have to start wearing a cup before long otherwise Kou will commence some surgery. I think a lot of people forget that Lirin\'s actually older than she appears, perhaps the relative maturity of Yaone, Kougaiji and Dokugakuji tends to make her seem younger. Although I\'m not sure about a pregnancy thing going on, I\'m not sure about that as a direction.
When I read the youkai Hakkai bits coupled with Ah\'nesty\'s reaction my first thought was \"Aww, no one loves youkai Hakkai (except the fans!)\" but Gojyo\'s still there. They are both so needy. It\'s sweet, but just as broken as the other. I think the subtitle for this fiction ocould be \"Don\'t leave me\" or \"Don\'t let go\"
Gojyo is hot when he cums!
Although feeding us with this now only makes us hungry for more ... you do realise this.
Wow the lemon was hot ... very nice and I like the way the threesome was handled. I also like how you snuck in Ah\'nesty\'s intentions to take Hakkai/Gonou away but learning that Hakkai isn\'t Gonou. I was also pleased to see that Hakkai gets jealous when his barriers are down.
Ah absinthe ... yes that is the traditional way to drink it. I\'ve never had the illegal stuff, but I\'ve have had the polish 95% proof stuff, usually mixed with vodka the same strength (hellshot it\'s called at the bar). The rush is quite scary, you do start to see things in detail but for some reason you can\'t touch that detail, like raindrops. I usually drink it straight or with lemonade and ice. I can be a bit of a lush though. The feeling of being drunk on absinthe -for me anyway - is the ooh-look-shiny phase and I think you portrayed that well, but with the darkness of Hakkai\'s youkai side tainting it. We don\'t see Hakkai let go very much and so I think these tightly laced emotions tend to spill out and I like how the absinthe loosened the lock. (and Hakkai\'s vine adorned endowments ^_^ made for one happily lecherous reader)
Drinking games - I liked these and would have loved to see it in the manga or the anime. I remember Fuzzy Duck from my first year and we had \"Never have I ever\" for the \"I never\" game. It was a scene I could see happening in the anime.
And congratulations to Goujun too, with his lecherous wife ^_^
I also like the mirrors scene with Goku and Sanzo. Sanzo\'s an exhibitionist really, same as Kougaiji\'s always gonna be over-protective. I think Goku\'s gonna have to start wearing a cup before long otherwise Kou will commence some surgery. I think a lot of people forget that Lirin\'s actually older than she appears, perhaps the relative maturity of Yaone, Kougaiji and Dokugakuji tends to make her seem younger. Although I\'m not sure about a pregnancy thing going on, I\'m not sure about that as a direction.
When I read the youkai Hakkai bits coupled with Ah\'nesty\'s reaction my first thought was \"Aww, no one loves youkai Hakkai (except the fans!)\" but Gojyo\'s still there. They are both so needy. It\'s sweet, but just as broken as the other. I think the subtitle for this fiction ocould be \"Don\'t leave me\" or \"Don\'t let go\"
Gojyo is hot when he cums!
Although feeding us with this now only makes us hungry for more ... you do realise this.
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August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I didn\'t hate the threesome as much as I thought I would have. But I was expecting Gojyo to just knock her out and say \" GET OFF, MINE BITCH!\" I\'m glad she\'s gone. Yay. Like I said, she was cool, when she wasn\'t touching Gojyo. Argh.
But this chapter had me cracking up like crazy. Hakkai being drunk was hilarious, I kept sending them to my friend Maria and she couldn\'t stop laughing either.
Yes, I DID catch the Gojyo x Goku line. That was awwwwwwwesome. Gojyo [in my mind] looks hot standing there, let alone cumming.
OMFG. And when Gojyo licked the syrup off Hakkai\'s chin and started making out with him...god, if that was a scene in the anime I would have started masturbating. That was fucking sexy. You. You are god.
I also realized I love how your coordinate all the events that really happened in Gensomaden into the story. It adds a sense of...like, realisim. Like I almost think if they made Saiyuki Reload Gunlock...2 or whatever, that that\'s what it would be. It\'s just so true and possible.
Let\'s just hope they find your fanfiction and say, \" Hey, let\'s make this into a Saiyuki Porno Series.\"
I would spend...so much on it.
You wouldn\'t have to, you\'d be getting money for the idea so...you\'d be kinda loaded. Lucky. I want a write a porno series inspiring fanfiction. D:
But as always, another amazing chapter. I almost cried when I saw that it was updated.
But this chapter had me cracking up like crazy. Hakkai being drunk was hilarious, I kept sending them to my friend Maria and she couldn\'t stop laughing either.
Yes, I DID catch the Gojyo x Goku line. That was awwwwwwwesome. Gojyo [in my mind] looks hot standing there, let alone cumming.
OMFG. And when Gojyo licked the syrup off Hakkai\'s chin and started making out with him...god, if that was a scene in the anime I would have started masturbating. That was fucking sexy. You. You are god.
I also realized I love how your coordinate all the events that really happened in Gensomaden into the story. It adds a sense of...like, realisim. Like I almost think if they made Saiyuki Reload Gunlock...2 or whatever, that that\'s what it would be. It\'s just so true and possible.
Let\'s just hope they find your fanfiction and say, \" Hey, let\'s make this into a Saiyuki Porno Series.\"
I would spend...so much on it.
You wouldn\'t have to, you\'d be getting money for the idea so...you\'d be kinda loaded. Lucky. I want a write a porno series inspiring fanfiction. D:
But as always, another amazing chapter. I almost cried when I saw that it was updated.
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August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Java, words just can\'t express how much I love this story and your writing. You are, without a dobut, one of the best authors (not just fanfic authors) I have ever read in my entire life. I am honored that you consider me both a peer and a friend. Congratulations on your latest chapter, it was yet another gem in your already brilliant collection.
Love you! :: heart ::
Love you! :: heart ::
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August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whahaaha!! I\'m leaving you a proper review! Go me! XDDD
Whee~ I like that idea with the mirrors! Niiiice~ Kinky, XD There\'s something very... special about uke!Sanzo... *snickers* When Sanzo was telling Goku not to get any ideas ((after they saw Gojyo and Hakkai)) it made me think of your \"18 Thinks You Never Wanna Hear During Sex- Saiyuki Style; Goku\'s diadem hitting the floor.\" *falls over giggling*
Your threesome was hot~ *fans self* I hope it was worth all those people telling you they hated Ah\'Nesty, XD; I liked her though... I like the idea of grey contacts too, O.O Yeah but anyways, XD, I love Hakkai\'s demon form... who\'s name I could never hope to spell without looking at it, XD;; So yeah. I love how you portray him though, and how he see\'s Gojyo. I remember back when dudes captured Gojyo or something... in a cave I think? And Hakkai took off his limiters and killed them all to rescue Gojyo. I just love how he doesn\'t actually SEE, but more like he sense\'s. He doesn\'t see Gojyo physically as much as see\'s him as fire and red water and stuff... Then in the cave deal I was talking about he didn\'t see the demons as much as he smelled their fear and blood and stuff. *sniffles* Tho\' it was sad how he inflicted all those wounds on himself...
....Why am I talking about a forever-ago chapter NOW?? Oo;; *kicks self back on subject*
The I Never game is one I\'ve heard/read about before, but yours was by far the funniest, XDD I loved all the little inside jokes in there and stuff! God I was cracking up soo bad in that part. The Fuzzy Duck sounds like a fun game too... to play though, ^^; Must be pretty hard to pull off in a fic...
I\'m actually kinda sad Ah\'Nesty left... I liked her okay. She makes good for a threesome too!! *cackles* XD I was surprised when Hakkai just... ENTERED her though! I mean, I was just like \"O.O Ohh shit...\" but the way you explained it all makes sense and stuff... Still a tense moment though, heehee. I wanna know what the note says! I hope Hakkai doesn\'t feel bad or anything. Oo That\'s all that poor guy needs, lol.
This chapter was great ((of course)) can\'t wait for the next!! *bounces*
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LaTeR ^___^
Kage
Whee~ I like that idea with the mirrors! Niiiice~ Kinky, XD There\'s something very... special about uke!Sanzo... *snickers* When Sanzo was telling Goku not to get any ideas ((after they saw Gojyo and Hakkai)) it made me think of your \"18 Thinks You Never Wanna Hear During Sex- Saiyuki Style; Goku\'s diadem hitting the floor.\" *falls over giggling*
Your threesome was hot~ *fans self* I hope it was worth all those people telling you they hated Ah\'Nesty, XD; I liked her though... I like the idea of grey contacts too, O.O Yeah but anyways, XD, I love Hakkai\'s demon form... who\'s name I could never hope to spell without looking at it, XD;; So yeah. I love how you portray him though, and how he see\'s Gojyo. I remember back when dudes captured Gojyo or something... in a cave I think? And Hakkai took off his limiters and killed them all to rescue Gojyo. I just love how he doesn\'t actually SEE, but more like he sense\'s. He doesn\'t see Gojyo physically as much as see\'s him as fire and red water and stuff... Then in the cave deal I was talking about he didn\'t see the demons as much as he smelled their fear and blood and stuff. *sniffles* Tho\' it was sad how he inflicted all those wounds on himself...
....Why am I talking about a forever-ago chapter NOW?? Oo;; *kicks self back on subject*
The I Never game is one I\'ve heard/read about before, but yours was by far the funniest, XDD I loved all the little inside jokes in there and stuff! God I was cracking up soo bad in that part. The Fuzzy Duck sounds like a fun game too... to play though, ^^; Must be pretty hard to pull off in a fic...
I\'m actually kinda sad Ah\'Nesty left... I liked her okay. She makes good for a threesome too!! *cackles* XD I was surprised when Hakkai just... ENTERED her though! I mean, I was just like \"O.O Ohh shit...\" but the way you explained it all makes sense and stuff... Still a tense moment though, heehee. I wanna know what the note says! I hope Hakkai doesn\'t feel bad or anything. Oo That\'s all that poor guy needs, lol.
This chapter was great ((of course)) can\'t wait for the next!! *bounces*
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LaTeR ^___^
Kage
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August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I thoroughly enjoyed the new chapter, but I have to say that seeing Hakkai completely blitzed had me in stitches. I never knew that abisinthe was supposed to taste like black licorice - I must put that on the \"illegal things I might try\" next to non-imported Ouzo.
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August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The jeep just sank, and Hakuryuu\'s pissed, lol. *Snickers* The comments are in completely random order, lol, because I don\'t want to go back to figure out which came first!
I\'m actually not fond of threesomes usually, but this one was one of the better ones I\'ve read. Top three, at least. Though I now want to smack Ah\'nesty, lol.
I never played I never. *Sips drink and grins* And that Fuzzy Duck- Ducky Fuzz- Aw, fuck the duck... Er, yeah, heh. That was funny, lol.
Heh, Hakkai orally molesting a cherry. Funny.
Like the Gaiden flashback! Very much LIKE the gaiden flashback, lol! Aw, hell, I\'m obsessed with Gaiden, lol...
Snerk. The scenes with the other groups were FUNNY, lol! Especially the one with just Kou and Lirin, heh. *I started giggling for a minute there, lol.
140 proof... That\'s seventy percent alcohol, ne? Sheesh, now I know what they mean by a burning sensation going down your throat...
Doku, you pervert... *Giggles*
Two lines in particular KILLED me, lol:
“Konzen, please tell me, how opened-minded is your aunt?” *Massive snickering fit*
Goku continued. “Gojyo’s hot when he cums.” *Thud goes the jaw*
...You do know Sanzo is going to murder you in your bed if you get his cock pierced, right? Lol!
This chapter isn\'t going to steal the favorite spot- that\'s reserved for numero tres, lol- but it\'s definetly a good one, lol!
Question: How long do you think it will be before people pounce on you for 20? Lol! By the way, for the deleted line thing: It\'s pokeball, go. not go pokeball. Snerk. A phase I will never return to, lol. *Head desk*
I\'m actually not fond of threesomes usually, but this one was one of the better ones I\'ve read. Top three, at least. Though I now want to smack Ah\'nesty, lol.
I never played I never. *Sips drink and grins* And that Fuzzy Duck- Ducky Fuzz- Aw, fuck the duck... Er, yeah, heh. That was funny, lol.
Heh, Hakkai orally molesting a cherry. Funny.
Like the Gaiden flashback! Very much LIKE the gaiden flashback, lol! Aw, hell, I\'m obsessed with Gaiden, lol...
Snerk. The scenes with the other groups were FUNNY, lol! Especially the one with just Kou and Lirin, heh. *I started giggling for a minute there, lol.
140 proof... That\'s seventy percent alcohol, ne? Sheesh, now I know what they mean by a burning sensation going down your throat...
Doku, you pervert... *Giggles*
Two lines in particular KILLED me, lol:
“Konzen, please tell me, how opened-minded is your aunt?” *Massive snickering fit*
Goku continued. “Gojyo’s hot when he cums.” *Thud goes the jaw*
...You do know Sanzo is going to murder you in your bed if you get his cock pierced, right? Lol!
This chapter isn\'t going to steal the favorite spot- that\'s reserved for numero tres, lol- but it\'s definetly a good one, lol!
Question: How long do you think it will be before people pounce on you for 20? Lol! By the way, for the deleted line thing: It\'s pokeball, go. not go pokeball. Snerk. A phase I will never return to, lol. *Head desk*
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July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really should review this when I have my brain around me but I enjoyed reading this fanfic a lot. I used to have qualms about your style of writing the Saiyuki cast. Because Saiyuki is essentially japanese and your writing style is proper english and it somehow clashes each other when I was first exposed to your Sanzo/Hakkai fanfic you posted on the hardlove community on LJ. I liked your writing but your style of writing didn\'t seem to match that well for Saiyuki.
And then you got me hooked onto RAHO. ^__^; The \'style\' difference (between Saiyuki and your writing style) is still there but you integrated it well enough that I can ignore it enough to enjoy the fic. I like how you manage to change a PWP into a full-fledged fanfic with plot ^__^
And I love the tension and everything that surrounds Gojyo and Hakkai. It\'s done wonderfully and I wish i could phrase myself better to describe how I feel about this fanfic. But I guess this will suffice for now.
Uhm, to satisfy a small curiosity, are there anymore chapters after chapter 18? I\'ve seen you mention chapter 22 in the writing on your website and I\'m itching to see what would happen now that a certain blonde female is back on the loose.
Great job. Hope to read more. ^_^
And then you got me hooked onto RAHO. ^__^; The \'style\' difference (between Saiyuki and your writing style) is still there but you integrated it well enough that I can ignore it enough to enjoy the fic. I like how you manage to change a PWP into a full-fledged fanfic with plot ^__^
And I love the tension and everything that surrounds Gojyo and Hakkai. It\'s done wonderfully and I wish i could phrase myself better to describe how I feel about this fanfic. But I guess this will suffice for now.
Uhm, to satisfy a small curiosity, are there anymore chapters after chapter 18? I\'ve seen you mention chapter 22 in the writing on your website and I\'m itching to see what would happen now that a certain blonde female is back on the loose.
Great job. Hope to read more. ^_^
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July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome fic!!(Not counting that my favorite pairing is GojyoxHakkai) Can words describe how much of a genius you are?! Great job! You caught the characters personality\'s to a tee! I only on chapter 3 though...but I can say that this is the only long yaoi fic I will ever read. Because:
1) I have a short attention span
2) I love you story so I can\'t help myself.
Keep up the good work!!!!
1) I have a short attention span
2) I love you story so I can\'t help myself.
Keep up the good work!!!!
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July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Perks* Any chance the next chapter will be out for my birthday on July tenth? Lol, I\'m turning 16.
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June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*points to empty, blackened hole in soul* Look, cup. A hole *lip quiver*. In my soul *cheesy music*. Caused by YOU. Lol, hope you\'re getting that blasted computer fixed; know that RaHO/any brand of cup fic is missed!