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I must admit, half of this chapter I skipped. Why? BECAUSE I HATE AH\'NESTY. Well, just because she\'s an OC and has a past with Hakkai. Nothing against you, I just hate that stuff. Other than that, yay, update! I was reading what you wanted to get by before this ended, and was so happy to see the Kami-Sama arc up there. I hate Kami-Sama, but the pairing Kami-SamaxGojyo is just alluring to me. Of course, it\'d be totally unwilling, but still! I still like it.

On to the good stuff! Goku is such a tease~. I was cracking up the entire time. Uke!Sanzo is the absolute best. Goku should be seme all the time~! Well, monky monk can be seme OCCASIONALLY, I guess. Fantastic job with those two! And of course, the lovely GojyoxHakkai. Voyureisim between these two makes me happy. That\'s just so sexy in my opinion. I\'m such a sick freak. But, waaah! I loved it!

I feel for Kannon-Sama. She has stolen the worlds from my mouth. ..Kinda. AT LEAST IT UPDATED! <3


Pfft, I\'ll take care if you if you get a bladder infection. (Insert heart here.) As always, you keep writing, I keep reviewing! Mwah!

~Clojaku

When I first started reading RHOA I kept reading...and reading...and reading. Now I look for all the up-dates and go to your web-site every few days. It scares me when I become obsessive with anything, but you have easily turned out to be my favourite fan-fic author. Having had no previous viewing of Gaiden, I didn\'t really know what to expect. When I finally *did* get exposed, I laughed my ass off, cus I could think of nothing but your versions of the library and their discussions. I truly love the angst and romance that you put into this many chaptered love affair. It brings true emotions out, which is rare in anything I read (I haven\'t cried since I read \'The Yearling\' and that was *ages* ago). Your use of visualations and words have become better as the story progresses. I love seeing artists grow in as their work blooms. I\'ve found I can\'t listen to \'Open up Your Mind\' at any time without thinking of the time when Gojyo was ripped from Hakkai and tortured. I cried sooo hard. Please, Please, Please let there be at least *one* happy ending (even if it\'s an alternate). They deserve that. And don\'t stop writing or I will hunt you down...^-^ Keep up the splendid work.

This was a wonderful tonic to my crappy week of temp work (I\'m quitting because I couldn\'t hack it). Haha Goujuns so possessive and I\'m learning the diffrence between pervert and letch. Seems to be that Gojyo knows he\'s a letch, I\'m rambling. Although the Pervert Award must be wrested away from you and given to Kanzeon Bosatsu, she is the supreme pervert, Lord/Lady High Pervert. I get the feeling that if she got her way she would follow Goku\'s idea and they would all play cards. For some reaosn now, whenever I read your story, read the manga or watch the dvds I keep expecting her to jump Jiroshin ^_^ I think he\'d enjoy it!!!
Advanced Hakkai-torture now, he can\'t keep anything safe although for some reason, him having a/considering a Prince Albert doesn\'t seem so unusual, I wonder why. My poor green-eyed baby, you just wanna cuddle him and make all the nasty angst-demon go way.
I think I see where the connection between the two half-breeds is but I\'m gonna remain silent because I\'m probably wrong.
I cheered when Tenpou laid out Gonou. He maybe part of Hakkai but I don\'t really like him, but then there\'s aspects of me I don\'t like (i can refer to my Gonou-voice as Black-Mind). Gonou is an interesting figure. I like your portrayal. Its an interesting thought to think that regardless of whether Kanan was there or not, would he have still become a youkai? Part of me thinks so.
Guild of Wenches, technically I should be a member of that. My housemate calls me Babs (after Barbara Windsor of Carry On films fame) and my nickname is Naughty Wench.
I\'m also notice that Gojyo has his isntinct that he is needed, I recognise that from the manga, a yaoi whisper is always a good thing. One day I shall have to send you my \"Yaoi list\" from Saiyuki. Me and Neko-Chan went through most of the volumes and picked out every single yaoi whisper we could find (with some prime sake and Jack Daniels to ease the way).
When Flaxen returned, I immediately sat up and spat bitch at the screen (believe me its lonely here).
Oh dear too that Tenpou\'s starting to reconsider his actions of shielding Hakkai. I like to think that he\'d actually survive knowing all those things. But we have a Gojyo there too!! He\'ll look after him regardless, who know it might make another connection to them.
Jealous Goujun is funny and my mouth fell open when you wrote the words lap-slut (thats been used to describe me before because I do lollop on people) I\'m questionning your psychic abilities and wondering if we have some spooky-ass connection thang going down ... either that or you got a bug on me.
Vanilla Flavoured Sanzo .... hee hee he will have to learn that a starwberry-sauce monkey can also go on vanilla as well as rocky road (I\'m hungry too, can you tell). Poor Sanzo, he thinks too much he\'s so jaded. In fact he\'s more jaded than Sanguinans eyes and Goku\'s being taked more than just maths lessons from Hakkai. Awwww ... even in nookie he\'s still a teacher (Kami Sutra 101 with Cho-Sensei complete with diagrams and experiments)
The tenderness between Gojyo and Hakkai makes me cry, it really does.
Oooh, oooh and its not even morning yet, I suppose I better get back to work ... hmmm ... oh I\'ll read through it again because no one knows I exist here.
C\'est la vie
If I ain\'t married by 30 I\'m coming out for you by the way, you can live in the ivory tower and sing me stories all day, with a direct line to the Ann Summers online order centre

Ohajiki

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Ah!!!I\'m addicted to you, cupnjava! n___________________n I\'m notgood at words so I\'dkeep this review simple. your way of story-telling is great. It has a smooth flow, and the way you write about the boys are very very natural and believable. Please keep on writing!

You\'re the Bo~mb!

Doug: The best performance so far.

Janet JAckson look-alike: I\'mlooking forward to your next performance, cupcake.

Simon: ... (edited out, but it\'s really tips for Goku n__n)

*lol* Aren\'t you tricky, making us think there was something kinky going on between Hakkai and Gojyo in the first scene ^_^ I loved Sanzo\'s sense of humor in this chappy, I know I\'ve mentioned it a quazillion times, but I really think you\'ve nailed Sanzo. Very dry sense of humor, and another underlayer that might almost resemble amusement...except, come on, it\'s SANZO. Konzen was quite well done, as well; the dialogue regarding a \'piece of the whole\' was excellent, and one of those lovely sections that makes me stop and do a double take to contemplate the other implication. Also, the segue from \'Sanzo picked his ear\' to \'Hakkai slowly lifted a hand...\" struck me in a particularly visual way...it just fit together so well, I could easily form my own fade in when I read it. Also, excellent job with Hakkai\'s inner thoughts and the confliction between them and his behavior; always very well done in this fic, but he really stood out to me in this chappy. One of my favs with him was him imagining various ways to fuck Gojyo while blandly replying that they were unable to partake in outdoor activities XD I also really liked how you interspersed the previous bits of Gojyo\'s torture with the present. LOL \'justified monkey-icide\' and \'this guy was fun. he threw sticks\'. The symbolism of the apples was just freaking amazing; so well done and subtle that I almost missed it. Also loved the Dr. Suess bits, very unique perspective on that. And Goku\'s uber sweet dialogue about how Gojyo staff could cut his kite free, Hakkai could build a new one, and Sanzo would prevent stupid actions was just absolutely adorable and SO Goku...in fact, I think you basically summed up his entire personality with that one little section; an earnest outlook that runs a helluva lot deeper than anyone thinks or bothers to inspect. Loved it, and always looking forward to more from you; I don\'t think I need to emphasize how much I adore your balance of abstract and extremely concrete *glomps*.

Hello! Just writing to give a little encouragement. I am absolutely addicted to RAHO. While \"Unrequited?\" was quite nice (even before the 2nd chapter was added), I won\'t lie & say there isn\'t a little voice in the back of my head chanting: \"chapter 17! chapter 17!\"
Now Ah\'Nesty is here (yay! & I usually don\'t care much about original characters), it should be interesting. Poor Hakkai. *smirk*
Oh, yeah, I reviewed once as \"a little shy\", but now I\'m registered, though I doubt I\'ll ever post any stories.

I have been following this since \"Relax and Hang On\" for goodness sake, and I have NEVER reviewed. I wanted to, but couldn\'t find the link. Honest! Blame it on temporary ineptitude or the fact that I am usually up until the wee hours reading your perfect chapters. Now, I\'ll be honest, there are moments in this epic I dislike, but your manipulation of language, continuation of theme, all of it just...blows me away. And you get better every chapter! I don\'t have time tonight to read the chapter after this, but I will soon. I\'m with you til the end, honey. Some time ago, you inpsired me to write a song--something I do occasionally--called \"Emerald.\" I\'ll have to send it to you some time.

Hello, hello to all fans of RAHO, this is the PuffMonkey with an update. Being a close, personal friend of cupnjava, I have insider information! I promised her I would not tell you anything specific but I just want to assure you that the next chapters will be VERY ANGSTY and VERY HOT! Please believe me when I say this, because I don\'t even get to hear the whole thing and I always wait with baited breath for these chapters to come out too. I am a HUGE fan of the 5/8 pairing and am still in awe at the stories she comes up with especially the freshness of each of the lemons.
Cupnjava you know I love ya and I mean it, but I had to make sure and do this since I you know I am your biggest (and first) fan! Please check out her website for all the goodies she creates and finds!(sorry off the top of my head I can\'t remember it but email her or do a search for it and you should find it!)
Huggles!

I love you ... marry me.
Oh my poor Hakkai, there\'s no end to his suffering is there? And I want a Hakkai-bran dmassage, work has been hectic. And now he\'s gonna be found out, I always knew Gonou would be a pervert. Poor Hakkai, no wonder he\'s paranoid, he just wants everything to be okay and people to like him (he\'s more like Sanguinans than he realises). And a great twist with Goujun\'s wife belonging(?) to Ah\'nesty too. So many little details that I missed on the first reading (Sanzo wanting to DO Hakkai).
and the reminder that Gojyo\'s dad loved him, even if he doesn\'t know it and the little metal corss (I went back through the manga for that Minekura is the master of Yaoi whispers)

More naughtiness and Hakkai taking the reins. I should have read it at work, I needed to do filing to cool down. And neither one fo them seem to be incontrol or dominant, your writing really demonstrted that just because someone has the top, doesn\'t give them the control.

I\'m left wondering if Hakkai will find out about his childhood, it might break him ... does Ah\'nesty know about that?

Hey read the last couple of paragraphs to My December by Josh Groban (cover of linkin park), and chapter 15 too. It sums up Hakkai\'s i-will-angst-to-heaven-and-back-again-if-I-want-to . i can send it you if you like.

Great chapter and I\'m always hanging on for any of your work.

X

Sorry addendum, just seen the say no to nitro picture, it\'s going on a t-shirt btw!

^-^ Your welcome for the review, but I think that it was well deserved. I\'m going to start off by saying that this chapter was as wonderous as the last 15. It was great. I can\'t wait to see what happens now that Ah\'Nesty is there. O.o It could be interesting. Gojyo seems to enjoy it so far. It was very funny indeed. I\'m loving all the twists and turns in this fic, its so complex its amazing. Looks like Sanzo has won over Konzen for now, but who knows about that... Yeah...... In regards to my wonder fics, each is for a different pairing I like. This is my 58 fic. I\'ve got an 83 fic that was great, but this is the 58 fic. The other fics are for various other couples. I guess I\'m picky about my fics. And yes, three days with classes and homework in between readings. Totally worth it. I think considering how long these chapters are the mistakes are very few and far between. Its amazing. You guys do a wonderful job looking over this fic. I don\'t think I even noticed anything in this chapter. Kenren and Tenpou... <3 .... I know what you mean, there isn\'t anything you can not like about them. <3.... Thanks for the welcome to the ride. I\'m enjoying it, and I know that I will enjoy the whole ride. ^-^ Peace out. \\/