rate_review Reviews

Tee hee *pervert that got turned on* Alright, shame on me for reading this! X_X But...it's so HOT! Excellent work. ;) Maybe you should write a Tatsuha/Eiri. :P

This was a wonderful story. Seeing as how I am currently writing a YuujiXHiro fic of my own, I was all giddy when I found this. The story was beautiful and well paced. You took your time in developing the plot line, which was very nice. Hiro didn't just blurt it out the second he saw Yuuji in doorway, which I really liked. Adn it wasn't all just about sex, like I thought it would be. You had a very nice story line and you had a very nice way of carrying it out.
You should, however, get a beta. There are many grammatical mistakes, and spe spelling errors, as well. XD But, hey, I don't have a beta, either, so I guess I'm not one to talk... (Just trying to help, but I think I'm putting my foot in my mouth, instead...)
All in all, I really enjoyed this fic. It's wonderfully sweet and heartwarming.
Thank you.

YAY! I can read this over and over again and NEVER get tired of it! This HAS to be your best fic yet! More like this I say! MORE MORE!

Hey, where did he learn how to do that? hehehe. loved it.