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July 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story will appeal to readers who enjoy animals. I can envision some very amusing scenarios. You need to continue now and develop the plot, and you might also consider editing to make things flow be (I (I realize this is your first draft). This will help you find your \"voice\" for the next chapters. Do you know what I mean by voice? It\'s great to see another writer tackling Ai no Kusabi! Hope to see more soon! Congrats--you\'ve done the hardest part--started writing! Keep it up!