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by ruhana

person Alexx the Hopeless
schedule October 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yuki....tied up and helpless....Yum.

alexx
person cute-big-headed-yaio-goodness
schedule September 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG...WOW! That was so *pardon the language* FUCKING AWESOME!!!!!!!!!! This had to be the best Gravitation fic that I have *ever* read....and believe you me, that is a lot. Again, OMG, OMFG it was GREAT. Even though I would never have thought of that situation you made it totallt rock. You captued Yuki and Shuichi so well...I've been trying to do that since I began writing Gravitation fics. I have to ask how you did it. I can totally see why this story belong HERE...it was so sexy, and sultry, even a little slutty in places. lol So...all that I can say is that it should carry the yaoi seal of approval, and what makes it great is that it's not changing the plotline AT ALL!!! Thnx for writing it...LOVED it! ;D
person setosprincess
schedule September 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i need more!!!!!!plz write more it's too cute!!!! i loved it!
person Silver Tear
schedule August 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW! I loved this. its written in the samnda nda way as the gravitation graphic novels, which is excellent. I love the facft that you've managed to write a shuichi seme without him being too ooc! WELL DONE!
person Jess
schedule August 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
soooo good...i loved it ^_^
person chasity
schedule August 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very good! *c* i * i want more Yuki...

NOW!

i don't see any...

You've asked for this...

KUMAGORO BEAM!!!
person forgotten butterflies
schedule August 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
O.O Uh... wow, that was, hot! How do you spell Yummy again... Y-U-K-I? S-E-X? Yuki tied up on a bed? *licks the monitor* Ahh Hell you know what I mean! Anyway, I'm impressed (did you guess?) I really dont like Yuki as Uke, but this one is DAMN good! Hee hee! I love the ending, with Yuki's true feeling coming to the surface. I started to tear up. Oi Im rambling, sorry. I could have just put I loved it and left it at that. ^_^
person janette
schedule August 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*manages to catch breath*

Oh my fucking god! You've managed to not only make this super sexy, it's angsty and even a little WAFfy at the end. This is one of the most sexiest lemons I've ever read.

*goes off to find more of your fics*
person Shikijou
schedule August 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AX'3 X'3 Too cute, I must say, I really enjoy stories where Eiri is the Uke, and I think you portrayed him quite well. The only thing that bothers me is 'confessional' afterwards, it was a bit OOC, and I think that could have had a bit more too it, as it seemed a bit rushed. But other than that, I liked it a lot.

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