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aw, i can't wait til ryo and dee get this sorted out. i want to see what happens really bad. thanks again for another chapter so soon! can't wait, dying for the new one.

The story just gets better. I hope JJ doesn't mess things up too much. Looking forward to more.

Hi there. Just wanted to tell you that you have a really good story going on here. Your detailing is very descriptive and fits very well with what is going on with in this story. I can't wait to see you update the next chapter.

=) woah, can't wait to see what happens. damn jj. haha. really, pleasee come out with the next chapter soon.

I feel so bad for Ryu and Dee! They're both hurt, alone, and not with each other like they need to be. This so heartbreaking and that damn JJ made is worse with that card! He's such a unfeeling bastard! He should get a life and leave Dee and Ryo alone! Hurry with the next chapter!!

Damn you! You can't leave it there! Noo! Now that that's out of my system...This is turning into a VERY good story. I liked the lemon for a first chapter *Blushes*. Then it was really sweet, and now it's getting angsty. I like it. You seem to have thought this out REALLY well. The character's don't seem too out of place either. I'm sure as the chapters go on, they will become a little OOC, but I love a good OOC, and I can tell that this one is going to be a really good fic. I also liked the way you did the Dee and Bikky scene. I can SO picture the two of them doing that. I look forward to reading more of this!

Aw, please continue your story, don't stop it at cliffhanger... so cruel *______* I wto rto read the meeting between Ryo and Dee. Great story!

I hope the visit goes well and that Dee will be released into Ryo's custody. Hurry with the next chapter!!

Wow! What a great start to this story. Loved the HOT first chapter. The characters are very true to the Fake manga. Looking forward to more.

I hope will be alright. Hurry with the next chapter!!