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for An Angel's Pain

by Cedric

person Firefly
schedule September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I know I'm 2 years late but what the heck... Please continue, ne?
person Kiriou
schedule November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow........*stares speechless*
person NEKOSHU
schedule October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Power to the pink haired people (Nagh)
SukumaandShu4ever bounces up and down, looks at Yuki supiciously, Cassette is looking for you and she\'s pissed---
NEKOKADAJ---NekoSHu---
NEKOSHu---that Ring doesn\'t mean a thing, and the last time I checked, The last time i slept you took me to Hojp\'s labatory growls--
NEKOSOra----Riku being mean again, and he\'s scarry---I hate Kauri
NEkoShu---IS Sukumma and Shu-shu going to get together I mean I\'d have left him one month in the making Damn Shuichi has a lot of patients-
NEKOKadaj---your coming to me with the reunion---
NekoSHu---you see me reviewing--
NEkoKadaj---So---
NEKORYU reads fic, smiles SHuichi-- Glomps NekoSHu--NekoKadaj glares at husband--I\'m not siigning any devorice papers-=
NEKOSHU---shut up---launches into NEkoKadaj arms--- and jsut kiss me---we have children I doubt that I\'m going anywhere you\'d just hunt me down--and I think I\'d geve yuki a heart attack---then again--here yuki yuki yuki
Classy Raven--- awsome fic, I lave Neko\'s and It seeems Nekoshu did an acceptionly good reiviw upate please
person Yana
schedule March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG poor him
please will the next chapter be out soon
schedule December 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awesome. So what is going to happen next? Keep up the great work. Coolsa.
person Anon
schedule November 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oooh its starting out really well I hope you contiue it! I luv Ryuichi and Shuichi fanfics but u never find em. Don't get me wrong luv YukiXShu too! They both rule!
person hidden golden eyes
schedule November 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey, nice fic... and realealiealistic... how did you do that? i hope you'll continue this fic...ü
gud luck!
person Naria
schedule November 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*tremble*tremble* WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHH!! Myrt art aches for poor poor Shu!! This is a fabulously angsty and traumatizing story! it is...because Yuki is a traumatizing asshole!! Mental pain!! >_< IT HURTS! >_< hOWEVER, ME LIKEY VERY MUCH, SO YOU GO WRITEY MORE NOW!! Because if you don't...welll....I can't be held responsible if you're randomly attacked by rabid flying squirrels, that's karma...even if they happen to be from my backyard...*pets squirrelly head, whisper* ::soon, my pet...sooooon...::
person OrangeJuice
schedule November 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So far, so good, I think. Only one thing--you need to watch your verb tenses; although it was a lot better in the second cha, in, in the first, you kept jumping from past to present tense. Other than that, I think you have an interesting, well-written story, so keep up the good work!
person izumi
schedule November 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ahh.. it's sod!! d!! please write more!! i love angst^^

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