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September 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow O_o.....
That about covers it...*thinks*...Yup.....^_^
That about covers it...*thinks*...Yup.....^_^
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August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
While an interesting story, it suffers from lack of proper development. One hour really isn't long enough to write a story. Motivations aren't very clearly explained. It also relies too much on plot cliches. I would recommend redoing it and explaining the background more.
One or two parts did make me laugh, however. Keep at it.
One or two parts did make me laugh, however. Keep at it.
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August 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Now this one was awesome!
I love the pairing! ^^
I love the pairing! ^^