rate_review Reviews

wai!! you're so good at this.... this so hot... no wonder everything around here sizzles... do continue it would be bad if you'll leave it hanging..^~, looking forward for the next chapter...

It's really too bad that there aren't more writers like you in FoR fandom, because this fic is sinfully good. Not just pr0n of course, but your writing in itself. It's so engaging and it's just really good. I especially love how you wrote the scene where Fuuko's walking in the rain and Tokiya takes his time to think about whether or not he'd follow her. "the rain it's slowing me down" and his answer "I know, it's my element" was seriously my favourite exchange in this entire fic. It was just so concise and yet poetic. And also it's hot. Hee. It's too bad it seems you've abandoned this fic but I do hope, if you're struck by inspiration again, you'll continue it because we want to know what happens.

I love this! You should really continue it, it's great. I would really love reading more and see what happens between Fuuko and Mikagami. Great fic.

i hope u continue this,...........


please do....!!!

ummm... i was actually wondering ifthis fic is discontinued... it's been a long time since i have last read it and it's still until the 6th chapter. you'll update, right? this fic is interesting if you must know of what SOME people think of it... i was actually looking forward to the characters' reactions about their situation. please continue...^^

I just like to say (again, possibly) that I love this fic and especially this sentence \"Kami... I think she wants to see a grown man cry!\" LOL! BTW, *when* are you going to update this fic?!?!? I\'m dying here!!!

Are you continuing this? Please say you\'d continue this. This is too good not to continue!

Loved your story. I anticipate the next chapter as much as Tokiya anticipates their next coupling, lol. It\'s a shame my husband doesn\'t read long fics. I\'m certain he will be as hormonally charged as our main characters. Ha ha ha. Keep up the great work. This is one of the better Tokiya-Fuuko fics I have read!

is it done?

if it isn\'t, continue please!!!!!!!!

tokiya and fuuko pairings are the best!!!

Really nice... You\'ve finally updated!!!
I\'m really looking forward to where this one\'s heading....

Update soon!!!!