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March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I thought it was wonderful, real sweet. As I\'ve read the manga I\'ve sometimes felt like this was the situation actually, but I\'ve never really admitted it I guess. Loved your writing style.
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March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Best. Hiro/Shuichi fic. EVER!!! *applause*
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December 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm.... I liked it.
But maybe you coulda had a bit more.... hmm... detail here and there.
I am avaiable if you ever need help. So don\'t hesitate. ^.~ I love helping newbies!!
GJ and write mor please.
--Midnight--
But maybe you coulda had a bit more.... hmm... detail here and there.
I am avaiable if you ever need help. So don\'t hesitate. ^.~ I love helping newbies!!
GJ and write mor please.
--Midnight--
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December 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is awesome nice job. ^_^
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December 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I actually liked the ending. It was kinda sad, but fit the story well. There were word choice errors and sentence structure problems, I think, but I\'m no expert. Nothing major. Overall, it was a very good story. Bonus points for it being Hiro/Shu, and you would\'ve gotten double bonus points if more happened involving pocky.
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December 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
HOW SWEET! I love Hiro/Shuichi pairings too and there just are not enough of them! Thanx for writing one! It was a great ending and a great one shot! =)