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November 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was awesome. Ive read it over twice! You cant leave us hangin, get some more up soon pleasee! One of the best fanfics ive ever read to tel the truth
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November 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
YAY YOUR BACK. ahem.
Update soon.
Update soon.
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November 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Gotta admit very impressive. Didn't think I'd actually like a pokemon loving human fic but it's done impeccably well. Kudos to you. If I might make a suggestion they may wish to stop off at Cerulean City. You made a reference to Cerebii and the punishment in that forest...that means that this Suicune knows Ash and Co (don't remember if it was Misty or May in the movie or not but I know he knows Ash and Brock). Proof of his knowledge of the team comes from either chapter 8 or I'm 99% sure chapter 9 when it's a recap of how Suicune got there in time. His comments directed fully towards the instance with Cerebii as if it was happening at that moment and it fits with the movie as Suicune races off somewhere partway through the battle (if I remember correctly) because Cerabii tells him that Cerebii has to handle it. Honestly having her meet up with the other team members may be an interesting twist.
Alternatively you could also have her meet up with Team Rocket or maybe even have her meet up with an adroable Vulpix and have her befriend it (I'm secretly hoping for the Vulpix I've always been a HUUUGE vulpix fan...it's always my fire type unless I chose a Fire starter).
I've rambled....but really amazing story...and btw Suicune's reaction....it's identical to what I'd do if someone was attempting to rape my girl...except I would PURPOSEFULLY set fire to his remains not let it be an accident. After he was burnt to dust then I'd put out the flames myself (since I don't have Suicune's power of wind). I love my woman with all my heart and I would do anything to keep her safe...and failing that someone attempting to harm her like that or god forbid succeeding....would not survive the encounter...hope that's understandable.
AT ANY rate I LOVE the story so please update update UPDATE...oh and keep an eye out for Pokemon: New Beginnings on AFF, my first ever Adult fanfiction story so I hope it will be good, pairing Ash/Misty (both aged 16 in my story). It goes from the beginning of Pokemon through the whole series...and it's nothing like the series you know...Ash is a lot darker...and even has a gun, Gary is willing to kill to protect his sister....and there are 8 items of ultimate power...the Eon items...eight people have been chosen as the carriers of destiny to carry the items...the leader is destined to control the legendary pokemon to fix the past...which was destroyed by Mewtwo and Giovanni. It was here that Soga Lagee first made his debut (it's a remake of one of my first stories ever but I never got around to finishing it...besides I wanted to redo it with a deep romance between Ash and Misty). I hope you will read it, if you really want to read it, add holysoga229 to yahoo or holysoga229@live.com to msn and I'll inform you when the first chapter is up.
Alternatively you could also have her meet up with Team Rocket or maybe even have her meet up with an adroable Vulpix and have her befriend it (I'm secretly hoping for the Vulpix I've always been a HUUUGE vulpix fan...it's always my fire type unless I chose a Fire starter).
I've rambled....but really amazing story...and btw Suicune's reaction....it's identical to what I'd do if someone was attempting to rape my girl...except I would PURPOSEFULLY set fire to his remains not let it be an accident. After he was burnt to dust then I'd put out the flames myself (since I don't have Suicune's power of wind). I love my woman with all my heart and I would do anything to keep her safe...and failing that someone attempting to harm her like that or god forbid succeeding....would not survive the encounter...hope that's understandable.
AT ANY rate I LOVE the story so please update update UPDATE...oh and keep an eye out for Pokemon: New Beginnings on AFF, my first ever Adult fanfiction story so I hope it will be good, pairing Ash/Misty (both aged 16 in my story). It goes from the beginning of Pokemon through the whole series...and it's nothing like the series you know...Ash is a lot darker...and even has a gun, Gary is willing to kill to protect his sister....and there are 8 items of ultimate power...the Eon items...eight people have been chosen as the carriers of destiny to carry the items...the leader is destined to control the legendary pokemon to fix the past...which was destroyed by Mewtwo and Giovanni. It was here that Soga Lagee first made his debut (it's a remake of one of my first stories ever but I never got around to finishing it...besides I wanted to redo it with a deep romance between Ash and Misty). I hope you will read it, if you really want to read it, add holysoga229 to yahoo or holysoga229@live.com to msn and I'll inform you when the first chapter is up.
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November 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You have a fantastic story here! "Call of the Wind" is a very satisfying story, and one of those rare indepth, complete plots too. You capture Suicune's character perfectly and you have a knack for creating interesting plots and tying it in with erotic scenes as well (Porn without plot does get tiring). I am a fan of beastiality, and "Call of the Wind" is definitely my most favorite beast story here. It's definitely the story that I always return to, whatever the time. I look forward to reading more of your stories and meeting more of your original characters! Keep up the amazing work.
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February 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You are an incredible author! This fic is a work of art!
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February 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I must say that this is the best fan fiction I have read thus far. Now I must read the rest of your works-*sigh* what a hardship :P...I give you unlimited amounts of praise not only for your plot development but also for the fact that out of ten chapters I found only one small spelling mistake and zero grammar/punctuation mistakes (you are the only writer I have read thus far that can claim that-if you have not noticed this is my biggest pet-peeve.)
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February 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
please i hope you update this its such a wonderful story
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February 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
suicune rocks!
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January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love it so far its juicy >)
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January 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOW....that is all I can say...I don't read pokemon fics, but my friend told me to read this...it made me cry!
Please update soon!!!
Please update soon!!!