rate_review Reviews

this is really good. The blood bath was really good but over all, I like the sex scence best! I\'ll keep looking for the next chapter, I expect it to be *very* good.

It\'s great to see you\'ve updated! This is one of my favourite stories! Wholesome in plot and not mindless screwing around! It\'s really one of the best lemons I\'ve ever seen in my life! Thank you! *huggles*

Wow, absolutly love it! Can\'t wait for the next chapter.

^_^ * hugs * I LOVE YOU ! *smirks* not really but i LOVE your story! >.< you made me wait sooo long. well at least the wait was worth that.. and in your own words you said it wast over.. soo.. as is my way.. *pokes* TYPE >:3 (( an if you dunno what that face is its my evil happy kitty face )) ^_^ oh i like pokeing you..* poke poke poke* ^_^ your my favorite writer *POKE* so type me some more chapters to read and brag about to all my friends.. yes.. your getting bragging rights ^_^ tho im courious what your gonna do with the lovely couple now.. i mean o_o where they gonna live? grrrrrr your not typeing fast enough :\'( see im crying now and i like you :\'( do you enjoy keeping me in suspense.. well * hugs * if you do your doin great at it

WOW THIS BETTER THAN THE LAST CHAP. I CAN.T BELIEVE THAT HAPPENED THAT WAS AMAZING THE WAY U DESCRIBE IT WAS GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOODDDDDDDD. THANK YOU FOR RESPONDING.I CAN\'T WANT UNTIL YOU UPDATE.

WOO-HOO!!!!! YEAH!! GO SUICUNE!!!!! I enjoyed reading about Dredger dying so much...ohhhhh that was fun!! VERY good!!! And so nice of you to upload 2 chaters at once....yes, very very nice. You da author!!!

HHHHHHHHHHOLY SHIT!!!!! WOW I CAN\'T WANT UNTIL YOU UPDATE THE NEXT CHAP CAUSE THIS WAS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO DAMN FUCKIN GOOOOOOOOOOOD!!!!!!!!!! PLZ UPDATE SOOON

YO I READ THIS TWICE AND I AM BEGGING PLZ UPDATE SOOOON PLZ PLZ PLZ. ONE QUESTION IS NAIYA GOIN TO GET PERGENT SINCE SUICUNE\'S SEED KEEPS SHOTING IN NAIYA\'S WOMB? plz write back to me when you get this.

Cool, I like how you actually gave this thing a PLOTLINE. A lot of people don\'t think past the lemons... it\'s sad really. Your story was a breath of fresh air to tell you the truth. Keep it up please.

I love your story. I hope you write more soon. I was thinking you could make a trilogy out of this story. The two other stories being about the other Gaurdians(Raiku and Entei) finding someone for themselves. I could be intresting and fun to read. I had an idea about Entri\'s story, but I don\'t want to steal your ideas, so I\'ll give you some.