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I looove this story! Its so incredible. Very well detailed, wonderful description, grammar, emotion, love, lust! It has everything! If I were you I\'d finish this masterpiece as soon as possible to not keep the reader\'s cruelly waiting! *HINT*

Wow, I\'ve been reading this fiction for a while now but I only just became a member of the site. So, now I am happy to be able to review and tell you just how much I love your story. ^_^ I was actually quite pleased to come across a story with Suicune in it; he\'s one of my all time favorites. In the games where you can catch him, he doesn\'t have a gender. Still, I always imagined him being male; it just seemed right. I guess the people who created the game made him that way so they wouldn\'t get complaints from the oposite gender.

I don\'t like that new lawyer guy you introduced. He\'s making me nervous and I hope that if he does ANYTHING to hurt Naiya that you have Suicune rip open his stomach, tear out his intestines, and feed them to starving Houndoom. (looks at what she just typed, Flinches) OK, maybe that was a little harsh but still, I really don\'t like him...update soon please. ^_^

OMG!! write moreeee please..... and hurry i wanna see it!! XD i dont hear a keyboard clicking away... work work work!!! <_< >_> ** pokes ** type damnit...

o_o it was so good i had to read it again... and scream when i can to the end....ohhhh pleaseee post soon if you dont ill cry.. and.. im not even a pokemon fan but your story keeps me comeing back... **pokes** now type

the best fic ever i am dead seirious ive never read one beter. BRAVO!!!!!!

just wait til the North Wind gets wind of this, and Ho-oh, if he shows up, will be just as pissed

OMG!! if you write that he fucks her i hope that Suicune busts in and kills the guy! you sooo have to finish this! Suicune rocks! ^^.. altho i\'ve always seen it as a female.. but this is an awsome story. ^^ i can\'t wait to read the rest of this story! tis one of the best ... well tis the only suicune story i\'ve read. tis the best one so far. ^^ PLEASE continue this! *waits for the next chapter*

WOW. I love this story... I cant believe i just found it. I just read it and i was amazed usually stories on this site are hardcore but you gradually transition you chapters to keep your story at a pace that keeps people interested. i hope you keep writing. Oh and the kiss was realy wierd.

Congratulations. I\'ve thoroughly enjoyed your story so far. Very original. You\'re quite good at creating lemon scenes, with a touch of plot inbetween. Not to mention your not one of those whores who don\'t update. ^^ Can\'t wait for the next chapter, and when Suicine finds out how Naiya\'s mother treats her.

This is one fantastic story! I wonder if their relationship will develop into love - well, I\'ll just have to wait and see. Please continue! :)