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for When it Rains it Pours

by Brathian

schedule February 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Eep! I really like this story! The trio were wonderful. You did a very nice job with them. I want more, to see what is going to happen!
schedule February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is such a good story! please update it soon.
person rahcel
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
update update update!
person Ile
schedule December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i didn't think that this story would be all that great, but boy, was i wrong! i loved it! and i'm glad that i read it ^.^ can't wait for the next chapter though!
person Tiffany
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love the idea of the trio being there for Haru! But I think that there should be more of a *ahem* speaking part for Ayame. Aside for inaudable moans and a few choice, and quite colorful words. This new angle on the trio helps show a more emotional side. It's not just physical attraction between them! And I really hope you could touch on this. It would also make them look a lot less shallow. They are a trio b/c of how they compliment eachother and just .. well.. work. Maybe show some of this in how they interact with Haru. And i was wondering why there wasn't a lock on the door to their little getaway locale?
person Limpet666
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*has drown in a happy, smutty, yaoi-filled puddle* Wow...that was...so hawt... ^^ you should write more threesomes. The mabudachi trio make such a good threesome ^^

The Kyo/Hatsuharu thing is so cute as well ^_^ woo write more!
person viciouscallisto
schedule September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay, i like the story so far!! i really really liked the haru/kyo moment!! i hope it will be repeated! yuki was meaner than usual....what\'s his problem? update soon \'cause i wanna see what happens to my favorite ox and cat!!
person Crystal
schedule August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like it lots. the last chapter was very good and not too confusing ;) I want more story though. longer chapters... or just more chapters, either one. Please update soon
person Anastasia
schedule July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent, excellent. Loved the threesome!! ^_^
Good plot, I cant wait to see how everyone finds out about Haru and Kyo and how they take it... ^^ Tell me when you update!!
person BakaDen
schedule June 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was a yummy chapter. XD Seriously, who doesn\'t like a little M trio action once and a while! Thanks for your little notice, I sure do appreciate it much. Please update soon!

-BDen

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