rate_review Reviews

Wow.. this is a good beginning and great for one of your first fics! Please update so we can see what happens!

please update soon! i really liked it

It\'s sad and really great fic! (it\'s strange but every time I\'m reviewing something I always have to say that that\'s good, great, amazing etc. maybe because when I don\'t like something I\'m just delete document in which is copied that fic and
I\'m trying to forget about that, but I\'m afraid that I\'ve lost topic of the review...) I would be really glad to read ne chapters, because after first I\'m very curious about the end. It will be happy end? I hope so... ;) I promise to review last chapter! See you than!

Sorry for mistakes, I\'m Polish and English isn\'t the subject I\'m the best in.

Pretty good fic ! poor shuichi! keep on writing

I like what you\'ve done with ya fic ^_^ poor Shuichi I feel sorry for him!, Even if my favourite character is Yuki lol Yet, I wonder what happens next? lol ^^ I wanna see chapter 2!! ^^

kool story
pls pls pls update soon

I like the idea and I\'m curious to know where you take it, but you seemed repetative in areas. \"Damn Brat\" and \"sneered\" seemed to show up either a lot or close to each other.

Other than that, I liked it and I\'ll be looking for the second chapter.

--Dhampir