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October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow.. this is a good beginning and great for one of your first fics! Please update so we can see what happens!
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June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please update soon! i really liked it
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June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It\'s sad and really great fic! (it\'s strange but every time I\'m reviewing something I always have to say that that\'s good, great, amazing etc. maybe because when I don\'t like something I\'m just delete document in which is copied that fic and
I\'m trying to forget about that, but I\'m afraid that I\'ve lost topic of the review...) I would be really glad to read ne chapters, because after first I\'m very curious about the end. It will be happy end? I hope so... ;) I promise to review last chapter! See you than!
Sorry for mistakes, I\'m Polish and English isn\'t the subject I\'m the best in.
I\'m trying to forget about that, but I\'m afraid that I\'ve lost topic of the review...) I would be really glad to read ne chapters, because after first I\'m very curious about the end. It will be happy end? I hope so... ;) I promise to review last chapter! See you than!
Sorry for mistakes, I\'m Polish and English isn\'t the subject I\'m the best in.
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May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Pretty good fic ! poor shuichi! keep on writing
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May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like what you\'ve done with ya fic ^_^ poor Shuichi I feel sorry for him!, Even if my favourite character is Yuki lol Yet, I wonder what happens next? lol ^^ I wanna see chapter 2!! ^^
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May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
kool story
pls pls pls update soon
pls pls pls update soon
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May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like the idea and I\'m curious to know where you take it, but you seemed repetative in areas. \"Damn Brat\" and \"sneered\" seemed to show up either a lot or close to each other.
Other than that, I liked it and I\'ll be looking for the second chapter.
--Dhampir
Other than that, I liked it and I\'ll be looking for the second chapter.
--Dhampir