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July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh wow!! this is a great story!!
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July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Kyo and Haru make such a cute couple. Are you going to explain how Haru got romantically involved with Kyo? PLEEZE? I\'M DYING WITh CURIOSITY.
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July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wah! so sad! please update fast! I love this fic!
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July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aw! That was such a cute chapter! It made me feel really light hearted afterwords. ^.^ I know, I\'m such a sucker. lol. Anyway, it was really cute, I can\'t wait for the next chapter to this fic. I want to see how Kyo will get better, if he does. Hopefully there\'s not another disaster lurking around the corner, lying in wait to smother their little light of happiness. Oh, listen to me! How I babble!
gosh. anyway, update soon please!
-BDen :)
gosh. anyway, update soon please!
-BDen :)
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July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your 7th chapter is the same as your 6th. I can\'t wait to see what happens and I can\'t wait for the realI 7th chapter.
Talia
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July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was so heartbreaking...(sniffles) Curse you for making me cry :P But really, I love this fic, and I really want to know what happens next. Please update soon. And email me when you do? Pretty please?
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June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh gosh. I swear I feel like my heart has shattered reading just those first five parts of the story. I hope that Kyou wakes up, even if he is different. Update soon.
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June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, sounds like something I wrote once (but never finished!!!) Except it was Yuki who fell and Tohru who felt guilty. Anyway, I likey, save for a few spelling and grammer errors (and some making up of words) but that\'s OK, we all do that. (I say that right after I make up the word \'likey\') Oh right, and one other criticism... the whole \"5%\" thing. You don\'t have to repeat things like that for every character, you can elude as to what was said and it will likely be more effective. (please don\'t take offense, I always try to write some constructive criticism, I like it when people criticize me) Otherwise, I\'m really enjoying (is that the right word?) this fic. The first chapter was particularly amazing. I also liked your description of Kyo\'s fall. Very insightful. Poor Haru! I hope to see updates soon!
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June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ghhhhh! x____x -CRIES- oh the angst...bUT..i LOVE THE ANGST...yET...RAH what\'s gona happen! If Kyo gets stuck the way he is then he\'d just want to kill himself again! >___<\'\' -whimpers and falls out of chair-
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June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wahhhhhh! I got through half a pack of tissues reading that latest chapter!
I really like the story, but PLEASE make us smile! Onegaishimasu!
I really like the story, but PLEASE make us smile! Onegaishimasu!