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August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Konnichiwa!
Hrm, this poem doesn\'t flow perfectly, but it is over-all well written. A Few grammar mistakes need to be corrected also.
-Youkai Dreams
PS- You should change \'Onegai\' to \'Kudosai\' since you\'re requesting something.
Hrm, this poem doesn\'t flow perfectly, but it is over-all well written. A Few grammar mistakes need to be corrected also.
-Youkai Dreams
PS- You should change \'Onegai\' to \'Kudosai\' since you\'re requesting something.
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June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O.O *dewey eyes* AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!
It\'s SHUICHI!!! ^.^
It\'s SHUICHI!!! ^.^