rate_review Reviews

it made me laugh

To no name and pathetic:

Screw you.

To Haruna Hakkai: One of my fave Gravi-authors

Awesome! LOL! I loved it! Poor Eiri his hair got stuck in the zipper. I did notice errors, but that\'s okay. I understand English isn\'t your first language and I think you do really good with it. If you want, I\'d be glad to be your beta, but I\'ll undersatnd if you want to earn the respect of your readers without one.

Keep on writing! Don\'t let those stupid flamers discourage you! Listen to Ren! ^^

Look, this was funny and all but way over done... please, next time, think of something more original.

Also, and I don\'t like flamers and I\'m not just randomly attacking you like your first two reviews on this, but your vocabulary and grammer make the story very difficult to read. They make the story less enjoyable to read... so please work on it, because I would love to read more.

It is crap. Why did you waste your time?. Don\'t give up uur day job ,or, by the sounds of it...elementary school

I don\'t read stories where the summary has so many misspelled words and a severe lack of punctuation, grammar and capitalization.