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November 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have read your story and I would like to know what happens next so can you please update soon.
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October 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon. I would like to know what will happen next.
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August 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story... waiting for chp 2.....
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July 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOL This is funny I love fics where Keitaro gets revenge on the girls. I mean come on they fucking kick the shit out of him without even getting all the facts. They are constantly using and abusing him. Please please continue.
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December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Write another chapter damn it!
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September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You really should check into the chareters a little better as it is Motoko that is the Kendoist and Mitsuni that is well endowed. Also what with the situation that you are placing the girls in you might want to have a better reason then he got them out of trouble. Maybe rescuing them from harm while getting hurt in the process. Possibly a stay in the hospital for the immortal Keitaro seeing as how, what with the abuse he normally undergoes would kill lesser mortals. Something like really getting hurt could cause them to realize just how much they need him and NOT the other way around. Other then that keep it coming!
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August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...*speechless, cuz I enjoyed the story*
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July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You got the names all screwed up Mitsune (Nicknamed Kitsune) is the alchoholic writer with the good body. Motoko is the swordswoman who wears a kendo garb.
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June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOL Very good so far, keep it up, too good to let it stay as is, want another chapter up soon
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June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well nice... but Mitsune (aka Kitsune) isn\'t so bad tempered... and her breasts are among the largest of the LH cast.