rate_review Reviews

I like it. I don't know why. Some how I find this story very cute and streaming. Something new and wounderful at the same time. Thanks. Keep up the good work.

Most interesting POV and a good, untypical ending. I like it.

Ooh, that was a lovely one-shot! I wouldn\'t mind more but it\'s also good as is. A couple of minor spelling and grammar issues but overall, very well done.

\"None of you\"-->\"Neither of you\" since there is only two people within the fic, neither is more suited.
\"Repeatedly\"<-- spelling

Other than that, I think the fic is beautiful. Wonderful ending too!

Wow. I really enjoyed reading this fic. It was very very nice. ^_^ I actually felt like I was Tezuka, the way you wrote it. This was great! I can\'t wait to read more from you. I don\'t know if you will, but you should write another chapter. Keep up the great work, and I hope to read more from you soon! :D

It\'s nice to see something different once in a while! You really pulled off writing in second person beautifully; it can be really hard, and I\'ve read a lot of fics where authors have tried their hand at it, but this is the best -by far- that I\'ve read. I\'ve never seen PoT, so I can\'t say whether or not these two were in character, but I enjoyed reading this nevertheless. :) Hope to see more of your work in the future!