rate_review Reviews

I love it ^_^
thats it i love it
i wish the could make a spin-off series based just like this

If you enjoy writing this story you should continue it. Don\'t write for others, write for yourself. And btw, I have to say the 4th chapter has been the best so far.

this is the shittiest thing I have ever read


christ its bad.

Not only the writing, but the storyline in general.

Every sentence made me cringe. In a bad way.

It is obvious you do not like this kind of stories. The, after Eva crap. Or maybe you don\'t like the fact that Shinji is being like his Father? It would be lovely next time Anon if you actually took the time and told me, \"what was wrong with it?\" Telling me it\'s \"shitty\" aint going to help. Its nice you cringe at it - but at what exactly?

I cannot change anything, if you do not tell me what is wrong with it? Thats what reviews are for? The other people \"praised\" - maybe not the right for it; the storyline, and said it was great. Though I do not know if they share the same view now, at leats they told me certain areas they liked, and I expanded on the ideas they suggested.
Now, review again, tell me what part of the storyline - thats if you figured out what it\'s about yet - is wrong?

This isn\'t a dig at you, it\'s a request.

Geez, what is Rei\'s problem with loving people who treat her like shit? She seriously needs to go on a homocidal rampage or something. It was a nice chapter and you suceeded in making a sorta cliffhanger type of thing at the end. I\'m eager to learn why its taking over 10 years to make that weapon among other things. I forgot to mention last time but I keep imagining Shinji\'s kid looking like Gaara from Naruto O_o.

I like your version of Shinji, especially towards the end of chapter two. The whole \"You will get on that bed, and you will create the third child.\" thing was so twisted it was great. Well, at least Shinji isn\'t a pedo like Gendo was. Also, since you have the grim reaper as your avatar and you named a chapter \"Angel\'s Don\'t Kill\" I gotta ask, are you a Children of Bodom fan? They\'re my favorite band and play progressive melodic death metal. Oh one more thing, if you put spaces in between the dialogue it would make the fic easier to read.

Heh thanks for that. Yeah i would put double spaces between words, but i think it looks too... newbish? You know, making it look big? I dont know maybe im old school in my writing lol.

But anyway guys thanks for the reviews, and chapter 3 is coming soon. Its currently quaterly done.

P.S yes i am a Bodom fan. Nota huge one, but i know em. Thought\'d that title of that song fits perfectly for this fics ultimate purpose.

Wow, eesh, Shinji really does seem to be turning into Gendo here. He\'s creating a weapon for the UN? And it\'s attracting the angels? Interesting...
Poor Maya, her sempai went insane after all. I\'m kind of hoping that Shinji is serious about it being totally professional, or else it will begin to seem like Shinji isn\'t even in this story, and instead it\'s really Gendo, lol. Poor Rei, *imagines the mature version of Rei* .... ... .. . Huh? Oh! The review... Right... Umm, keep it up!!! This is awesome!!! More please!!

This is awesome so far, I have absolutely nothing critical to say about it. Please continue!! Your writing is great! I think it\'s an ideal post-series setting you\'ve created: Shinji running NERV, married to Asuka, colleagues with Rei, I\'m glad Misato is still alive. Seems to me that people like to kill her off, heh.

Anyway, please continue, more!

Cool story, I\'m very curious where your going to take this story. I can already see lots of plot lines and I\'m pretty sure from seeing the first chapter that you\'ll do a great job. Hope to read more soon.