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no no no! the threesome was fine! i really liked it ^_^
whoah. yuki is...persistent, ne? but that keeps it exciting-- what\'ll happen?? will yuki try something on kyo again if kyo sneaks off from school?? that\'d be hot. poor kyo, being molested everywhere, lol

Chapter 6 now, please! Shigure and Hatori ravaging Kyo! Me want badly!

That was so hot! I\'ve never imagined this pairing before, but it is definitely a fangirl\'s dream (especially throwing Shigure into the mix!) Update soon!

yaaay! you updated!! me so happy! It\'s very rare for me to find a yaoi sex scene that actually gets me excited (since i read so much yaoi...)-- but I really liked the part where hatori and kyo cause the bed to pound into the wall- that was a good scene.-- pfft, don\'t worry about grammar and spelling! what counts is the STORY, really!

oh cmon! if ur gonna add shigure (which obviously you now must) then its a given that haru should get to play. its not a fanfic if haru isnt in it! well.... sometimes it is... but theyre always better when haru gets added. lol i love ur fanfics.

Yay! Some Kyo lovin\'!!! Have them gang bang Kyo (although it isn\'t much of a gang with two people... but that\'s beside the point)! The innocent little kitty needs to be taught some lessons about the world of pleasure! Oh, and the more the merrier!

Cool story..very detailed. -_~ Keep writing!!

0.0 Hatori and Kyo, two of my favorite characters in Furuba and what do you know; they also make one hot couple.

Although I’m happy for Hatori and Kyo, I am a YukixKyo fan; so I’m secretly rooting for Yuki.

..........................or a threesome >_<

O.O What? They are going to do it on the table? That\'s why they were the only ones alone?! Genius I tell ya GENIUS! I guess Hatori\'s meal comes with a dessert ^.~. Great story. I enjoyed reading it big time! I was looking for a different coupling and this my friend is super unique! UNless I\'m blind, but I haven\'t seen this pairing at ALL so far. A nice change ^^.

Now about the story...Is yuki going to rape Kyo or is it going to be vice versa? O.O Hope not. Can\'t really see Yuki raping anyone exept maybe Tohru. And Kyo is head over heels for the lil\' see horse over there -_-. The plot is okay. Mostly alotta triangles such and such. And I\'m guesing Akito is, sooner or later, going to find out about those two lovers. XD (note: haha this review if covering for all the chapters...gomen ^^;)

Great story, can\'t wait to read the next update. ciao!

wooow! i really liked that lil hot scene of yuki on top of kyo! -- i enjoyed hatori being suspicous of yuki. Don\'t worry about grammar and stuff. Someone could write something with perfect grammar and spelling but it could be the most boring story on earth. The story is more important than perfect grammar and spelling.