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September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh yeah don\'t worry about the thesaurus! actually, if you use a thesaurus all the time without really understanding what the words mean, you could have a very poorly written fic that doesn\'t flow very well because it wouldn\'t match very well with regular/casual language
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September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay you updated!!! I just love these types of things! Fluff is fine but throwing some type of angst into the mix is the best! Can\'t wait for the next update so I can find out what happens next! (Oh, and thanks for reviewing my fic!;) You were the only one from this site.)
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September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please update soon!!!!
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September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
interesting update soon
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September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, try using a thesaurus. it really comes in handy. Just a seggestion. ^_^
Talia
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August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oooo so cute kepp up thegood work the story is great
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August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is really good!
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August 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Like the plot!
But will there be any Yuki and Kyo action in this?
Well I don\'t mind Hatori ^^
He\'s yummy 2
Ja ne!
But will there be any Yuki and Kyo action in this?
Well I don\'t mind Hatori ^^
He\'s yummy 2
Ja ne!
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July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YES! AN UPDATE! AND SUCH A GOOD ONE! Yuki with secret feelings! Shigure with hidden concern! And the whole \"bringing Kyo into the forbidden Souma estate\" was a good move! Hatori is such a sweetheart! Hmm... Maybe in the future, Akito will catch wind of this (since he seems to know everything by some ill means)-- maybe haru will go into a jealous fit over yuki...OR KYO!
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July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH wow. I love how this one started. I can\'t wait to see what happens next. Keep it up and update when you can.