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July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Um... you may want to use the spell check and reread before you post. I saw A LOT of seplling and grammer errors.
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July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
cant wait till the next chapter
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July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
plz plz continue. But this is a bad way to update your story. people will review if they like it or not. XP
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July 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woot for crack pairings. I\'ve always had a thing for KyoXHatori
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July 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THANK YOU, GOD! there needs to be MORE of Kyo/Hatori! I liked this a lot! At first i thought that Kyo\'s lover would be an OC but i\'m glad to see that it was Hatori (he\'s a sweetie --despite his reserved nature-- !)
you can make this more fun by adding more guys into the mix-- y\'know introduce some jealous guys who have a thing for kyo or hatori, etc etc! and don\'t forget kagura (grrr why can\'t she leave poor kyo alone!)
you can make this more fun by adding more guys into the mix-- y\'know introduce some jealous guys who have a thing for kyo or hatori, etc etc! and don\'t forget kagura (grrr why can\'t she leave poor kyo alone!)
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July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow you came back! anyways i liked the story! Kyo/Hatori pairings are so rare! Thank you for making one! i hope you do a second chapter! this one was kinda short but thats ok! please make another chapter!
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July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really liked it! It was very cute. Yes there were a few grammer and spelling errors but that\'s no a big deal! I hope to see you write some more!
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July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please continue this it\'s really good.