rate_review Reviews

MMMmmmm. rowr. totally liked it, you need to post the next part soon!

Au can be fun, but I\'m missing Mugen in this one. Jin is still very much spot on, however you\'ve kept him a bit too much in character with the hakama thing. I do like the idea of him being a bit of recluse but it\'s much to hard to buy Mugan as a medical student or wanting to freely give his time to an old woman.

However, I am your tru efan and know you will succeed in making me love this so I will be back. I must say, you\'re making me think very seriously about writing my own SC fic, I just don\'t know if my confidence if quite there yet. It would be AU like yours...I want to see how you do it first to get my own ideas to stop dragging their feet.

I\'ll certainly be back. Best of luck!

Hurrah! A new story from Full Metal Blunt!
AU AND OOC but I like the hints of mystery - why is Jin so solitary? What\'s with the old lady and the butler? You\'d think she would have at least mentioned her son to her new employee. And what exactly are Mugen\'s duties?
Besides seducing Jin, of course.
I will be waiting to read more - are you planning any story to go along with Episode 9 \"Beatbox Bandits\"? A stoned out of his mind Mugen, a screeching Fu and a confused Jin - sounds like yaoi to me. Except adding the munchies - they always forget the munchies.
Till next time, Mauz

I like it, i think you should continue it. Arigatou. Peace and Harmony to you.

FullMetalBlunt, I LOVE YOUR STORIES!!! I loved Cinnamon and Jasmine, I loved the sequal, I even loved Brothel Buglaloo! I love all of you stories and I love this one too! you get into the character\'s heads so well! I\"m begging you to continue! n_n Love your work, keep writing!

-HKL

Keep going this is a good story!

Wow! I really like it so far. They aren\'t that out of character, and the interaction is adorable. I found myself very sad when it ended. Please, please continue! I can\'t wait to read more!!